by karina_jayde
This was a cute story….maybe part 2 get the rights to the movie and have it created
Adorable. Loved the Christmas magic and the meta jokes. Perfect, sexy little love story!
such a great story & so wonderful writing!!! stories like this is the reason i like reading a bit more than watching movies…
gave me all the feels. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this whole story, drama, and funny scenes … you did such a great job in portraying the scene very vividly!!! I loved this…. Can’t tell you enough how much I’m happy to stumble upon your story .
Well written and fun story. Good luck and glad you are getting your story mojo back.
Okay you got me. I finished the whole thing in one sitting. I never laughed so much through a story as I did through yours. Their verbal dueling was both light hearted and endearing. I even read the sex scenes. The end was the tissue grab. They were still together and still in love. Who said there is no such thing as Christmas Magic.
Hope you have a Merry Christmas for you and your family.
Take Care
I am glad that you chose to write a different type of story, as I wouldn't otherwise have discovered your writing. Your writing is excellent and I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I hope that you write more stories like this in the future, In the meantime I'm following as you publish Drowning at Dusk.
Really enjoyed this: superb dialogue and neat contrivances without ever being trite. I hope you write more in this genre because this was right up there with the best.