All Comments on 'Simmering Guilt'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very Good!

Very well written but a little simplistic. The ride home will be a long one as reality sets in. He has been guilt ridden and she has been having a love affair for the last 20 years. His trust has to be shaken as he didn't have a clue. The fact his wife and his former lover have been laughing behind his back all these years can't help. He will know wife has a lot of sexual experiences and secrets, also other affairs he still doesn't know about. Good luck to him, he will need it.

voluptuary_manquevoluptuary_manqueabout 16 years ago
Harry Belefonte

said it best. "Dey say, yes de people dey say, dat de man hab alway led woman astray, but I say, please listen when I say dat she smarter dan de man in ebrey way." A rueful acceptance of reality will do him well.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...