All Comments on 'Simon Says Revenge Ch. 01'

Way too short of an opening chapter.

good start as this seems unfinished

You did the same cliff hanger as well. Hope you complete it with something more than psycho babble.

if you have more you should have posted it. If have no more yet then why post just this?

Really enjoyed this story. Just enough to hate her and her lover, Ramone and what they did to Simon. Liked that he got away and has lots of back-up (doctor and cops). Now we need the revenge chapter, how will he extract it on both betrayers. This is, for me, a 5 star story.

But entertaining and Ch. 02-04 is waiting. Thanks for sharing.

Really don’t like when a chapter story skips categories. I only saw this because of that last chapters being in LW. Had to back track to find that each chapter is in a different cat. While that may increase your exposure it does shit for your reviews.

Good read...

haha... literacy is a must. AVOID MONOGAMY????