All Comments on 'Sinner's Run Ch. 01'

i wondered how you were going to get him into the game, now I am wondering if colleen will end up in the game or will he get back to reality again. interesting

First off, I really enjoyed the story. It really reminded me of my gaming days, and how close I got to people I never knew the real name of. That said, the story was written at a time when being impressed by 8Gb RAM would have funny, with 64Gb DDR4 sticks available at the time this was published, and no system builder would ever say I will never need to buy memory again. Once I got past the computer spec part the story became delightful, with an interesting protagonist and well done chapter break.

I like that you made him a responsible driver, just in case any young, impressionable minds were reading.

this is seriously cool. though anime has made me somewhat careful...

The whole "you die in here, you die out there " thing.

It is cool though, well written and well pased.

Great Start!