All Comments on 'Sister'

a sequel

Liked the twist at the end. One of your better stories.

Would be good but... the obvious thing with her being able to easily talk about how it was a fake thing and that it was seriously her sister is too obvious. Should've made it so she couldn't have that opportunity... =/

Other than that it was good. but that's a huge factor to enjoying this story. 1 star for that major fail.

Seeing as that was negative... You could've had the two guys fore the situation faster to where she couldn't explain fast enough. If that was intended, it was failed.

Was alright but it would be easy to let the guys know it's her sister by saying they are there as role play. If you say that they would have known it to be true because she didn't go along with the roleplay.