by egoBorder
Great story, some proof reading help would be beneficial, but the story was great and follow ons would be terrific.
Great story and looking forward to part 2,maybe add in some oral on both sides.4/5
Thanks to everyone for the positive feedback! I have just submitted Part 2 for review, so hopefully it is accepted and published soon. Sorry that I am a slow writer, but your encouragement has made all the difference and I intend to continue writing and improving. Thanks again!