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Everything about our relationship was positive, so I told Emily that I loved her and that I didn't care that much about oral.
Emily got her prescription of BCP's and we lost our virginities to each other a month later.
Did Emily have any pain the first time we had intercourse? No, because for several weeks we'd practiced gently inserting progressively larger cucumbers (warmed first by soaking in hot water) into her pussy (nicely lubricated by foreplay). Of course, the cucumbers were put down the garbage disposal after they'd been inside Emily.
Chapter 8: Epilogue
And the rest, as they say... is history.
We're still a couple in 2017, and we live together in a nice apartment as "sibling roommates" to the rest of humanity, including our parents.
But several of our close friends figured out pretty quickly the fact that we're lovers. At first, we denied everything... but a few few kept asking. Finally, we admitted the truth.
Of course, our friends thought it was a little weird... but they accepted our decision and they've all been reasonably supportive. No one preached to us, no one recoiled in horror, no one stopped seeing us, and no one unfriended us. Our fear of being unconvicted felons melted away. We just keep a low profile, we don't act romantic in public, and we don't offer up any details. Plus, we're not gonna have a baby together.
We've also had no break-ups or shed tears of anguished heartache... unlike essentially everyone else we know. But none of our friends took our advice when we suggested the option of hooking up with a sibling after a painful break-up. Oh well... their loss.
Wild horses couldn't pull us apart. I never knew that life could feel so fantastic!
To: Tyler
From: Steffan Stratos
Date: September 16, 2017
Great story, Tyler! Thank you for letting me read it.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoWhile you may be an a novice at writing, I have to agree, "Nergal8617" kind of summed it up.
I would suggest you proofread the more popular works, along the lines of your preferred style.
Squidkibbleabout 6 years agoI was pretty excited for a story about a pair of siblings trying to survive an actual apocalyptic event. At first I was hoping that the Twilight zone stuff was going to be a foreshadowing of something down the line considering the mention of chapters.
What I got instead was a really quick unexciting confession scene and uninspired dialogue. At the very least there was opportunity to make this exciting. With the cucumber training, the idea that one characters doesn't start out being interested in romance, and the inexperience they have.
SteffanStratosabout 6 years agoAuthorHey, I definitely appreciate all of the negative comments and the time taken to post them. Seriously! Notice that I've not deleted any of the negative comments?
Although the negative comments make me laugh, I do hereby solemnly swear that I will make a feeble and pathetic attempt to improve on future stories.... but don't hold your breath (in other words, STFU and GTH). My style is my style. So what?
Write and publish your own stuff, and then let's have everyone read the deluge of wonderfully glowing comments detailing how much the people are enjoying YOUR fantastic creations of erotic literary genius!
Now, to any and all readers who gave my works a favorite rating, wrote a nice comment, or began following me (no matter how tiny that number might be).... thank you and here's a "High-5 from afar"!!!
Finally, to the microscopically small band of random followers that I've accumulated (numbering 20, despite my 3 stories having logged approximately 170,000 views as of 2/13/2018).... don't worry; I'll be publishing A LOT MORE STUFF for all of the other cranky critical readers to bitch and moan about.
Signed, Steffan Stratos
Anonymousabout 6 years agoLet's start by saying that this was a story written by an ameture. Not a professional. Also, steffanstratos is not the writer. He is simply the publisher. If you don't like the story, give it a low rating. Don't attack the publisher for something that is not his fault.
If you don't care how others feel, get the hell off of the internet, go outside, and learn some bloody manners.
