All Comments on 'Sister, Brother, Summer Lover'

They can continue go naked at home when they are alone.

This seemed very possible. I wish I had a sister to love while Iwas growing up near the beach.

Thank you.

You did a great job on this story,,,, please continue this one !

It felt so real......I loved it...

I found this story romantic and stimulating a totally plausible romp. well written as well please carry it on thanks.

Enjoyable....believable. More....

still waiting for you to continue with Pool Fun...

Part Aussie travelogue, part anatomy lesson. Messy but quite good story.

Very good story, but an 18 year old girl is not pubescent.

Loved the played down naivety of the characters and their voyage of discovery. Exceptional writing

So many changes from it's original form, both ages and names...

One of the best. Sweet but smoldering

Great brother-sister love story. Well written with a believable story line. Thanks!!

Thank you.. Glad you enjoyed this. I enjoyed writing it.

The reason that Jan is described as pubescent is that in the original, the siblings were younger. But despite the fact that the age of consent is just 16 in Australia, Literotica won't accept stories where the protagonists are under 18.

So, Barley Jazz, when they rewrite this, made them older (that also explains why Gary's 5 inch prick, as befits a 15 year old, became 7 inches...)

I am not complaining.. My original started with the head job and then flashed back to the day's beginning and also had chapter titles that were a self indulgent homage to Aussie pop songs. So whoever Barley Jazz is, they actually made this a better story.

Anyway, I am glad this story is still getting comments 15-odd years after I first tried my hand at porn 😎

Excellent though I think some anal sex would make it perfect- and realistic!

Fun story! Needs a second chapter :)

Wdere are pages 2 thru 4??????????????

More, please!