All Comments on 'Sister in Heat Ch. 01'

Incredible story !

Best I've ever read !!!!!!!!!!!!

What a sister... :)

Very good story!

Thanks for sharing.

For most of the story the brother was so dumb, she was so obvious and he is so clueless.

This one of the hottest tale I have ever read. Well done!

Great start

So many things you can put in this now, bondage, force, public, mum and dad?

But please no sharing. In family OK, just not with mates or outsiders.

One of the best developed tales I,ve had the pleasure to read here in some time. PLEASE continue!!

Very well written and enjoyable. Well done.

Really hot. The sex scenes were rough and perfect. Please keep it between these two. They are a great story.

Loved the hairs on Johnny's abdomen and chest!

This was one hot story. You definitely have a very vivid imagination. The sex scenes were great! Keep writing.

There's an obvious solution for any sister in heat. It's jumping around in her brother's pants.

What a wonderful brother-sister sex story !! HOT exciting and great dialogue from his baby sister :) Please write more and maybe they can move in together and really bang each other silly ?? Thank you.

...lly Dirty. I wanted him to cum on her face and then share it in a deep dirty kiss. I hope you will write more stories.

Jay Richards

HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow. This one goes in my top 5 stories. Just EXCELLENT!!!!! Thank you!

Give us more! We need more!

I gave this story a five only because there is no six. Awesome. Reluctance, insistence, passion, possibility of being caught, awareness of all the difficulties and a well described session. Thank you.

This has to be one of the best stories I've read, I mean OH MY GOD that was so fucking hawt!!!!

Dude...don't make us wait to long for chapter 2 of this story.

Amazing when is chapter 2 gonna come out

Thanks for reading! There is a Chapter 2 in the works. Can't guarantee when but hopefully sometime in September.

Loved your story

Great story you gotta keep this one going.

I know how you feel, drained

Just tell me where to meet your sister, and I would be very very, very happy to keep her busy so you could get some very well needed rest.

But. don't worry when she tires my out, you could take over, till your tired.

Then I'd pick up where you left off. Great plan, wad da say?

thanks

This story is my favorite I've read so far. My boyfriend and I check back every day for Ch. 02!

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"Take me, John-"

My fingers bit into the skin of her ass, and then she was grinding, her shorts riding up. She cried out-

"Whoa! No!" We flew apart like we'd been hit by a car and I raised my hands up above my head. "Okay, no. Whoa."

Her lip was bleeding, and she looked at me with an expression equal parts despair and anger. And then she ran.

@@@ You sir, are a fucktard inconsiderate bastard of a brother. If your needy sister on the edge of a breakdown begs you to fuck her, you FUCK HER! Dumbass. Lol. @@@

Monica brushed the hair out of her face and swallowed hard. "I didn't mean that...what I said. I don't want you to-"

@@@ ...Oh, but she does... But rejection and embarrassment kinda suck... @@@

This isn't something that can ever be undone." Sounds valiant, doesn't it? But my voice was breaking and my cock was rigid. Pressed into her waist, she was well aware.

@@@ They seem to ALWAYS write this shit in stories, the funny part is that the guy would never say that shit, lol. Always the girl wanting to fuck him, him acting all shocked and goody-goody parentish reluctant. Yeah right. Any brother I know would have kindly offered to be the sleeping stiff (heh) and general, all-around human fuck toy for his needy sister. Hell, I dont have a sister and now I fucking want one, lol! @@@

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It took a supreme act of will to extract myself from that beautiful mouth, but somehow I pulled it off. Monica let out a crushing little moan and reached for me, almost desperate to bring me back to her soft lips, but I rested my hand on her cheek and shook my head.

"If you want me as hard as your fantasy, you can't finish me yet." My cock pulsed impatiently, almost as desperate to return to her tongue as she was to drain me.

@@@ What?! He pulled out?! He's insanely stupid! Has this guy ever even been laid? He seems to have shit backwards, if she *doesnt* blow him now then he's going to go off like a geek virgin fucking the head cheerleader, lol. He is supposed to be Mr. MeLoveYouLongTime! not Mr. OopsWasItGoodForYouToo? Hehe @@@

As she got up I dabbed a sparkling bit of cum from the corner of her mouth, and she did the same for me.

@@@ cum? What cum? He never finished! Wtf? @@@

Maybe a part of me was doing this for purely altruistic reasons

@@@ Buhahaha!! @@@

She squeezed my bicep hungrily, and turned away.

@@@ its settled, after summer ends we're getting an apartment together till college is finished, then we're fucking moving out of state where nobody knows us, buying a house in the country, fucking like insatiable kinky wererabbits every day and living happily ever after. @@&

It was a good thing I did kegels, because I knew she wasn't going to make it easy for me.

@@@ ...funny thing is... I'd be absolutely perfect for this guys sister. It takes me forever to cum most of the time, unless Im having one of those rare in heat moments, and a lot of times I dont cum at all, just call it a night/morning when Im exhausted or my girl is too sore to continue. ...and laying on my back? Almost impossible... I dont know what it is but its really hard to cum on my back, even mastrubating. Strange, eh? My wifes girlfriends bitch because their guys are too quick and she bitches because I take too long, hehe. (Ive offered to swap occasionally but oddly she declined! ;) @@@

After many silly suggestions, she finally decided on "Lannister" (by far the silliest, and also soundest, choice).

@@@ how would you even remember that?! How about something simple and easy, like your last name? @@@

The fact that it would be mine - her unknowing, responsible older brother - well, at that point she lost the ability to type, slammed her computer closed and dashed upstairs. She told me later she'd started masturbating immediately after locking her door, and didn't stop until nearly midnight.

@@@ Gawd I want this girl. Right now! @@@

Johnny? Are you awake?" she whispered. She began to slide her hips around, rubbing the head of my cock against her wet pussy. "Big brother?" The head poked easily into her snatch. "Oh..." She sank it down, down until the head popped in. "Oh, God..."

@@@ The anticipation is killing me!! @@@

@@@ ...That was fucking ** awesome** :). Wow! I read it out loud to really enjoy it! @@@

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"Well, when I go to my real job, you're going to have to hide in here until mom and dad are gone."

"I know how it works, Johnny. Just let me stay here for now."

@@@ why cant she just sneak back to her room when he gets up, or set his alarm an hour early and send her back? Or set it two hours early, fuck her then send her back and take an hour nap? A couple times a week I set mine an hour early, wake the wife, eat her, fuck her, send her off to shower and eork and I go back to sleep ;) @@@

......ANYWAYS.... Best story ever! ...well in quite a while anyway, hehe... It BEGS for a second chapter with variations! Spankings. Taking her other virginity. Tying her up. Tying him up. Buying her a collar... And then a leash... Taking her shopping in a mall in a strange town while shes on the leash. (Play it off as a lost bet if someone you know sees you, hehe;). Roll playing. ...anyways, thanks for writing this!

What gives? Are we gonna see the REAL finale to "Kissing Kelly" and "Anita's Indiscretion" or fuck whatever? Everything else just blows; except this story, I guess.

C'mon.

-Stander

and to say fuck you dear annony

Wellz fuck you too.....boo-hoo

That's what a big brother is supposed to do for his sister. Look after her in her time of need. And it looks like Johnny looked after her nicely..

Sorry to long to hold attention

Put absolute lust and the ultimate temptation together, and this is the way things could happen. Could have gone a bit into how Johnny felt when Monica was luring him on in Venice Beach. No brother would have stayed soft when his sister was telling him how much she needed to fuck, and letting him know he was her desire - not even if he could have resisted. 5* again!

Wow. Who wouldn't want this? :p

You built a lot of sexual tension before any actual sex. Loved that. Women, or at least me, need more than just diving into sex acts. I didn't "give" you a 5; you earned the 5. Thanks for sharing your story.

but there is nothing romantic about calling her a whore. Doing that takes it from a moment of passion to degradation.

Wow. This story was amazing! One of my favorites.. I think bc I was able to identify with the little sister. The way she "is" is like me ;) But, it was very well written and I LOVE how incredibly detailed it is!! So good:) It feels so real. Like this must have really happened... I love it!

for the guy to be all reluctant and to say, "Things will never be the same again if we do this," but somehow it doesn't seem realistic. Men are hardwired to respond to certain kinds of stimulus. I don't have a sister, but I have a cousin and I'm pretty sure I'd jump at an invitation to jump her bones if she invited me like Monica did. Incest stories aren't as easy to write as a lot of people on Literotica seem to think; there are so many layers of meaning, of conflict, of emotion, that can't be handled adequately in a quick fuck-tale.

continue this story please. i want more.

I saw myself as the sister in this story. I didn't even touch myself and I came. I need a sequel. Please.

Your first chapter had me worked up throughout! This chapter is so unbelievably erotic.

My mental image of the sister is a blonde Janice Griffith.

It wouldn't make much sense for me to tell you one you already know. Also wouldn't make much sense for me to give up on a story halfway through, though I suppose that might be my troll logic at work...

Bite me. Let the author do what he/she wants. If I want to love & 5-star this story based on this chapter, I will. I don't want someone else to tell me xyz happens down the line so I should....

I will (or won't) read on on my own. I may decide to hate the next chapters & 1-star them. (Or not.)

And I may even decide write disappointed, disillusioned comments *at the end of the chapter they are about.*

There's no way to "like" comments in these threads. But if there was, I would like that one so hard.

I checked ... I guess spoilers can be reported.

I only report comments that I think are hateful or harmful to readers. I mean, the description to chapter 4 is "a new girl complicates Johnny's love life," so I don't think the Anony's comment really spoils anything. Also not quite sure how it could have surprised the reader, but that's another issue entirely.

I wish my relationship between me and my sister was like that. Me and her are really close but she's not into brother sister incest love stuff. She's 18 and i'm 19. Everytime i see her i get nervous because i just want to be able to kiss her and make love to her while she feels the same way towards me and there not be anything awkward between us. She has seen me naked before because i got out of the shower and thought no one was home and waked to my room without a towel on and she screamed out of embarrassment haha. She has the most perfect body (in my opinion) unfortunately i have never seen her naked. If i could make this story a reality for me, i would do it in a heartbeat.

Well-paced, very good character development.

this story was so good and this is only the first chapter XD

...I'd already read it, but great detail on how horny she was, the lead-in to them sharing...it was all hot. Even better read the 2nd time. Now I'll have to read the rest of the series. :)

only read ch. 01 so far, and BY NIRN that was a good story, so good i had to cum twice. i'd give it a 7/5 but alas, only a 5/5 can do.

You have a five for this terrific story. You hit all the high spots and ground deep on the low spots to give a great story of siblings finding sex enjoyable.

If have to say, this one of the hottest, sexiest and wonderful sister-brother stories I have every read on this site all these years and almost all others !! You did such a great job !! You have to do more, as there are so many opportunities and maybe horny baby sis and Johnny can go live together in their own home so noise isn't an issue and neither is sleeping together all night either. So much more can happen - thank you :)

Terrific story, not just because it's sexy, but because it's actually well written and told. Well done!

I have 2 agree with the others who have left comments a real good story one of the best I have read so far

Why do authors think the penis can reach the uterus?

Wishful thinking, I suppose...

Simply saying: FIVE GOLD STARS.

VERY Hot. Extremely well written and developed. At a skill level with Silkstockingslover and WhiskeyIsGood; not something seen often! Looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Went to the site you recommended in your Bio, and was impressed again! Thank You! :-)

Most of my voting would be a 4 star but this... This is too much of an amazing story 5 stars

One of the best I've read on Literotica. So far.

Thanks.

Love the story, got me hard right away, would love to see brother introduce sister to anal sex

Great story!

How lucky to have such a hot lil sister

What a great tale to tell and way to tell it. They were both ready for what happened, and I love the way you made it happen for them.

i reqlly wish i could have sex with my sister.

The reluctance is an integral part of the relationship. But they both understand what, and who, they want.

Re: to(o) long. I truly have sympathy for someone for whom 3 pages is too long to hold their attention.

I started to read CH 2. in the kitchen scene you had her saying she had never had one that big before. This contradicts what happened in CH 1. Not to be a jerk but having that broken sequence is a turnoff for me. You really need someone else to read your material to spot these kind of inconsistencies. you can help yourself by reading your entire story backwards. That will help you spot other things as well.

PLEASE!!!

I am so impressed. I have read a ton of stories here and other places and this story made me so aroused and hard I thought I was in that bed :) I hope there is more as its so good ..... you have a great writing style and that's how many couples would talk and act. Pure lust and enjoyment. Please more.... thanks!

Damn - this is the kind of fantasy that would be so wonderful to have ! Your writing is so well done. You hit every nerve and bring out a perfect scenario between a horny sister and brother. All of us reading this will have to stop between chapters to get ourselves off and then continue.

Thank you so much for your story - cannot wait to read more. Thanks.

Not as good as some, but better than most. Their relationship was very sweet and sibling-like, makes a huge difference. Some stories are very bad at that, some are better than this. Loved the part where she's lying naked in his arms; I know that is boring to most people, but to me that's one of the best parts of the story, sis sleeping (naked or not) spooned/snuggled with brother until the morning (or some of the night).

I was a little confused about the part where they're outside though; she "gets up with some cum on her mouth". I had to go back a read the last bit again because I thought I'd somehow missed him finishing. I assume you meant some PREcum. Kind of breaks up the flow for the reader.

To "auhunter", when she says "I've never had one that big" in Ch2, she's playing with him; right after she says that, it says "even if she had been telling the truth", which suggests she's just lying/messing with him. No idea why. Or maybe the author edited the story after that was pointed out.

What I want to know is why in part 1 it says

"When we were both finally naked, I positioned my knees closer between her legs and pushed my unwilling member down on her lower stomach, as if measuring how far in it would go."

Why his "unwilling member"? Seems like it's pretty willing to me!

Take my EBT card without asking, go buy all the Graham, crackers from the Piggly Wiggly you can, then sell them on the street corner for 5 cents on the dollar....Then you throw those nickels in my face and say to me "There, thats for being naughty, you dirty Graham cracker munching whore-a-palooza!"

To Kelsweet: his member is unwilling because he's so rock-hard that it's plastered against his stomach!! He has to force it down to get it near that tight, wet lil' pussy ;)

Without reservation, one of the best I've encountered on this site.

It's causing me a problem, though - I'll have to schedule when I read this series. Even though the chapters are nice and short, I need time afterward to recover and collect myself. I obviously can't do that in the morning before I have to be somewhere. What a delicious dilemma!

In the crashing brass pour, for sure, he wanted more

But recalcitrant she invisibly would flee, it had to be

Curating derision, restating her vision, incision

The cut of the figurative slut, like a nut she had shelled

Til the remedy quelled the expression of symptom

She turned into George Plimpton

Great exciting story! One among the best! !

nice, enjoyed it,, well written,,well paced. and saved as a favorite.

Finally, I've found a series that awakens my prurient nature and some forgotten memories. Helps that it's written in a very flowing style too.

Fun and sexy story.

The only part that made me raise my eyebrow was this line: "The bed creaked and strained as my sister used her powerful hips to grind on my cock and hit all of the places in her uterus she wanted to touch''

He would be in her vagina, and the cervix is the barrier between the vagina and the uterus. So I'm not sure how she would use his cock to hit all the places in her uterus....

The anatomy does not make sense in this description.

Great series!

Great story and I want more and that when you know it is a great one.

Yes, I've read so many sister-brother / brother-sister stories and really enjoyed this one. You have a great writing style that made me feel I was Johnny and got me so horny .... I sure hope you continue and that they borrow a friends apartment, so they can be a loud and act out as his horny sister needs. I sure hope you write more and thank you.

Sensational.

Such a beautiful story. I enjoyed very much... please keep writing!

Literacy 4.5/5

Ability to suspend disbelief (how "real" is the fantasy) 4/5

Eroticism and hotness 3.5/5

Sweetness and romance 4/5

Overall 5/5

It's enjoyable to read a story that I don't feel I have to hack through with a large machete for all the terrible grammar, thoughtless plotting, and ridiculous situations all to end up with a failed stroke. Thanks.

Every time I'm sitting through here looking for a new, interesting brother/sister or father/daughter story and I see this pop up in the list, well... I just HAVE to stop and read it again! Mmmmm!

To me the realism hits the mark a LOT better than most of the stories I seem to read, even though they are (mostly, hehe) all just fantasy. The brother is only slightly resistive, because he's supposed to be the good, responsible big brother, but caves fairly quickly because he loves his little sister, wants to help her, and we'll... He is a guy, and most of us ARE horny bastards, and umm, sis is fucking hot. Hehe!

The sister reminds me of a good FWB that I used to have, and I guarantee that if she had a brother, he would have been a happy sonofabitch :). ...so that's not a far stretch anyway, hehe.

Hell, the parents probably heard, but what do you do? Bust in and the house goes to hell, or play like you heard nothing and know nothing? Lol. Guess it depends on their disposition! I like to think they were a bit shocked, got over it, and had sex while listening, all the while saying how wrong it was to each other! Hehe.

Mmmmm, need to go find the wife now! Thanks again!!

That was so hot I couldn't keep my hand off my cock. Maybe you will add another chapter.

When you said she was gyrating her hips, letting his penis reach all the part of her uterus, I actually had to go out of my way to see if it's possible for it to *go there.* And the answer turnes out to be no, the cervix between the vagina and the uterus is simply too tight to let a cock in. Anyway it's way so hot I only noticed this in my third read. I'm not sure if I want to read the rest..

One of the best Bro-sis stories ever! And certainly the horniest sister ever! I really enjoyed the character of the younger sister, knowing what she needed from her brother, and going after him until he fully put out for her! Really looking forward to reading the Continuation Chapters. Thanx for the Read!.

Hot sister! Hot, hot, hot sex.

that far too many individuals, and especially females choose to ignore.

"So?" she said. "We're related, yeah. But we're friends. We're adults."

"Only legally," I said

Age alone does NOT make one an adult, and especially with far too many females. And forget the farce that females are more mature than males.

As it began ages ago, older men took younger females for a wife, Why? Simple, first, men waited until they could support a wife and provide a home. Which most females wanted prior to marriage. Second, men wanted a wife that could bear a child and survive child birth. In addition she would be able, after child birth to keep the home in proper order, including preparing meals. A younger wife offer that probability more so than an older wife.

2 helluva job, imagination and the most important putting that imagination into a vey well written piece (pun intended). Hot and detailed lead up an transition. And the dry whit was icing in the decadent cake.

Please add more chapters.

Sex was excellent,

Neat story but it didn’t flow.

I got bored in the first ⅓ of the story.

Still exciting though.

Bill

Nobody's perfect, but I Enjoyed it. I'll give it a 4.75. Like how you left some things to the readers imagination.

A little ambiguity about what he popped in her ass for a moment. She's noisy. He needs to put concrete blocks under the box springs, get a ball gag and some rope...

like a woman that admits what she wants

This is so hot! Monica's fantasy is one of my fantasy

I would love to have her do that to me. Excellent fantasy/story