by Don_Donson
This needs another chapter! My younger sister in law loves to tease me by flashing her small tits and natural blonde bush. Please continue.
Munchie184
Fun story, pretty well written except for a few typos and wrong words (suit vs suite)
Do a better job of proof reading. Lots of wrong words a spell check wouldn't catch. Pretty well done regardless of the issues. Though a little on the far fetched as far as public nudity. The twist with who's playing who here will lead to a continued laugh and a few other things from the real chefs of this plot.
Great start. My SIL used to tease me like crazy with little flashes up her skirt or down her top. I was able to spy her nude in our shower when she came to stay with us one weekend, and I've heard her masturbate through the bedroom walls during a family get together. I would have loved to have her watch me jack off or fuck her sister while she played with her bald pussy.
Thats anazing , slow seductive and hot.
Can't wait wht will happen next.
Kudos
Great start and very nicely done. Perhaps you will consider a proof reader?
What a great story!! Hope it continuous on the Oktoberfest in Munich storyline with the wife’s joining in dirndls!
Looking forward for john jessica seduction,big tits fetish and oral. Unexpected events
Great for, dare we say, Part 1. Let's up the ante, as was eluded to at the end of the story, and let the girls throw it down on them and finish the seduction. Is it possible the girls had known about this before and already had it planned to spice things up and give the boys their fantasies? Maybe even a little in, incest woman/woman treat? Hmmmm, so many ways to go. I agree that you need a proof reader, but other than that, carry on!
Great one.
Sorry but can't agree with last comment.
Girls shouldn't be know what boys are looking for, neither girls should have any clue. Hoping so much for seduction with unfulfilled fetish like big tits and dick with tenpetation of taboo and boundaries can lead to so much hotness.
Enexpected events are best soecially with john - jessica.
Very well narrative leads to extreme hotness.
Wondering how the thing willl lead. Hoping Super hot moment happens with john vd jessica
The scenes with the jewel butt plug at the pool were especially excellent. Please write more chapters!
That was an incredible story absolutely loved it I hope there’s another chapter
Thats super hot!!
Where are you amazing writer.
Kindly post next part, can wait to see swapping.
Jezz thats fcking erotic man!
Craving for swapping part bruh, bring it on!!!!
very good but with some spelling and grammar errors. Let me edit the wife-swapping sequel for you.
I quickly rated it a 5, because it was not just another shaved pussy story. "Just above her slit was a thick brown bush. It was in the shape of a large triangle pointing at the top of her slit. Sara had blonde hair, so the carpet didn't match the drapes, just like my wife's bush."