All Comments on 'Sister in the Shower'

A very good start

Great start, I am anxiously awaiting more

Good start but definitely lacking enough details and length to get readers turned on. Try adding to the story.

You description is good. I could visualize the action as it took place. I wonder if this is the first of a series concerning Laura and Tori. My main concern is the length. What you have is good. It is enough to pique my interest, but the abrupt ending leaves me feeling somehow cheated. Expand on what you have. Get the two girls alone and let nature take its course. Maybe later Derek can join in and we can be treated to a ménage a trios'.

This seems a perfect beginning. As if it were something wrote in a diary. Simple ..not a lot of excess info..typical of a first encounter. I sense you will add to this as you explore more sexual options involving Laura and Derek.

i think it was a great start but a little more development of the characters could work...and seems like you ended the story abruptly but otherwise a good first go

For your first try at it I would have to say that you did pretty well. It could have been longer to allow the set up to gain speed, but I liked how you kept things simple with the characters. I hope to see more from you.

Keep it cumming my dear nice one could make into a series

Following you now ;-)

Enjoyed this quick story. Looking forward to more from you

for your first story id say you did well. i hope you turn this story into a series. id like to see whare things go from here.

I enjoyed your first story, keep them coming.

I’m following you now to hopefully read more.

Plz keep story between the sisters. If u add brother or father or mother sex with daughters it will ruin the story for me.

This is a great start! I look forward to more and more of your stories

I love how short and realistic it is. A sequel would be nice where maybe it's reciprocated, but as is it really is perfect.

I watched my sister shower without her knowledge once. Her body was incredible with big, firm breasts and the longest, hardest nipples I'd seen. god I wanted to suck on them. I had masturbated to my sister many times. My pussy gets so wet! When she started to masturbate in the shower I shoved my hand in my panties and rubbed my clit so hard. I came when she did. I want to have sex with my sister

Olin Teijan kanssa suihkussa ja me nussimme kiimassa. Menimme sen jälkeen sänkyyn. Ei käytetty kondomia.

Teija sanoi olevansa raskaana.

Tämän jälkeen nussimme estottomasti kuten aviopari.

Metta serkku tuli käymään.

Saan kahta pillua paljaalla.

Great story so far. I hope you are going to continue it

This needs a follow up and try to stick to past tense it makes it easier to track the action and helps you keep things consistent

It's under the wrong category this is more voyer then incest learn the difference