All Comments on 'Sister is a Showoff Ch. 02'

None of your characters are likable.

True the characters are not very likable, but the story was hot.

...it must be just me who thinks you either ran out of ideas or set yourself a time limit that was reached, and left your characters hanging in the breeze.

On the whole a rather unsavory bunch.

This was depressing

I was expecting so much more in chap 2 but you kinda ruined for me and others by the sound of things.

The ending was crock, it seemed you rushed things along just to finish :(

Yep you sure ruined it by turning ricky into a pussy and rushing the second half of your story, up till then i enjoyed it.

Think it needs writting again !!

Chapter 2 is wacko. I think the author is pulling our leg.

This series of stories just fell flat. The first part was ripped from a fox cartoon episode that should have been credited at the story's outset. And this part you bring back the useless friend who he should have just sent away upon arrival. I would recommend you forget this story and write another chapter to big tits on Lil sis.

When you ended it with Lauren and Brit together I had some faith you'd get them split and Ricky back where he belonged fairly quickly. When you wrote about med school for Lauren I smiled. Then you had to bring back Joel. That along with cigarette smoking was it. If it had been someone besides Brit 'd have been okay but she's a little too much like someone I knew who died of lung cancer. In R.L. self destructive behaviour has real consequences. My problem I know...

This story really went sideways, would have been good if he left everyone behind and did well on his own. He could have left the incest behind him and had a family of his own, then years later he starts meeting people from his old life and you finish the rest.

What did I just read?

Maybe I was spoiled by reading 8letters work before this (nice reference by the way), but just what the hell did I just read?

Wow, I read the first one and thought it was decent. Part 2 had much lower rating but I figured how bad could it be? It’s much worse than the rating it has. It’s pure shit. Everyone turned into a scumbag. It’s epic in its cringe. You should feel bad for writing this.