All Comments on 'Sister Swap Pt. 05'

There (not they're or their) are arguments that cuck stories should be in fetish. When you go too (not to or two) far over the line and introduce slapping and water sports then there is no better place. You're go to get hammered for that.

You really need to get an editor or at the very least do your reader the courtesy of running it through one of the grammar checking apps. Though on all evidence I wonder (not wander) if you have access to a search engine as many of the errors would easily be corrected with a search on which variant to us.

You get a USDA, Grade A full on thumbs down for this one. Both for story and putting it in the wrong category.

You’re really going all out trying for worst story series this year in LW. Water sports? What’s next? Scat?

You wrapped this up so fast, I think you got tired of the story yourself.