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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another wonderful chapter. I don’t know anyone who hasn’t had that drunken sexual advance/mistake at some point.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Progression despite the spelling, grammatical and punctuation.

Please, try downloading a spellchecker programme that will proof as you type. It will be a godsend to/for you.

If possible, locate an editor.

I gave you a like for this chapter a day am looking forward to future submissions.

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60's male 5'8" overweight at around 280 lbs., married, had bi/gay experiences in my younger years but has remained loyal to his wife since marriage. Still dream of those younger years and love to act them out on-line.

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