All Comments on 'Sisterly Love'

hope that was part 1

You truly needed to formulate more of your story before submitting it. What you have here is a bit boring. Also, you have used "consummate" as a verb, which makes it nonsensical the way you say she consummated her divorce. Furthermore, you have submitted this story in the wrong category----should be in the incest grouping. If you're going to put it in this category, you need to, minimally, give us an idea what the ages of Lacy and Walter are.

I have the feeling Walter is going to be areal lucky guy.

Need a follow up

Yes it is part one, and as stated in the prologue, there are more parts to follow.

It's in the right category as there isn't any incest, and all the characters are mature. Late 50's to early and mid 60's. Including yours truly.

PS...consummate is a verb.

Lacey, what a great start to what I expect to be a wonderfully sexy series. You write the best sex scenes. What about Walter and the sister? I guess we will have to wait to find out.

I love where this new direction begins and can't wait for the next installment. You know you are and always will be my favorite author here. I know the next step will fascinate me as all of your stories do. Well done again

Thank you for the kind remark relative to the sex scenes. And yes, you will have to wait to find out relative to Walter and my sister. Hopefully you won't be disappointed when the time comes.

Thank you for your always kind comments and remarks, and I'm honored to be your favorite author here on literotica. As for the next installment, a lot took place over a relatively short period of time and I'm trying to be careful not to leave anything out. Otherwise things might not seem to make sense, or flow right if I do. But as always, the next chapter should be in about three weeks.

Yes, you're correct----and that's what I stated----consummate is, indeed, a verb. How you have used it in your story is just plain nuts. Consummate can ONLY mean "to finish or end" when it is used as an ADJECTIVE-----which is NOT how you have used it. As a VERB it means to engage in sexual intercourse.

My point about you needing to have written more before submitting is made even more strong as I read your responses to others. In this beginning you tell us nothing about the ages of anyone and give us no indication whatsoever as to who is going to end up with whom

Looking forward to to the next chapter 😊

Sounds like an interesting story of family life. I will be watching for the other installments.

I think I have read all or almost all of your stories now and have enjoyed them all.

Grammar Police.

In defense of LacyD consummate means to 'complete or fulfill' some thing, not just sexual intercourse,which the divorce was fulfilled or completed.

I here by find the defendant not guilty.

...for coming to my defense. You explained the use of the word perfectly, and how it was used in my narrative. Case closed!

Ok I really enjoyed this story. I don’t give a rats ass what word you use keep up the good work. I am more concerned with being entertained than grammar. If you feel the need to correct grammar go to Facebook wanted and for sale groups. That will keep you busy. Good work lacy.

Good start enjoyed this and look foreword to your characters consummation later this story. I enjoy your writing keep up the good work. Once this story line is consummated I am sure it will be very popular and enjoyed by many and receive the red H..

I wonder what will happen!

Looking forward to the next chapter

Lacey, I have read and followed you from the very start. As a mature male I’ve enjoyed reading about the cruise experiences and all of your group encounters. I wish I could view those movies and slide shows of them. You story are always told in your POV and are believable. Thank You Again and Looking forward to the next chapter of this story. XO

I hope all the following submissions are as entertaining as this one. Thanks for sharing.

The POV is female! From the way it was written I thought it was a man in gay marriage with Walter. You eventually let us know it was a sister and not a brother.

Just spent a weekend with my 70 year old widowed sister, who to my surprise, still has a robust libido. Stayed in bed with her most of the weekend!

Thank you. Enjoyed it, nicely etotic, hope there is good horny eroticsm to come. I didn't wank

off on this but hope to on the next.

Add this to the several dozen stories I've tried to enjoy lately, all ruined by unnecessary, and gross anal scenes.

Not sure the need to read about anal play is necessary. Rather a tun-off to me as well, perhaps just let it be a tacit act.