All Comments on 'Sisters of Fate'

SS06, as usual, a great story and especially perfect for halloweenie....lmao

Fantastic story ! I absolutely loved it, it had vampires, cheating sluts & love, it all tied together beautifully... I also found myself laughing my ass off.. You've out done yourself this week. I can't wait for next weeks story.... I'm a catholic, although its true the catholic religion doesn't believe in divorces; this wife's (Terri) trying to use her religion as cause for not wanting to divorce is just really idiotic because what does she call going out to bars with her friends & fucking some stranger? I've never actually heard about Catholics not allowed to take birth control pills ( I've actually taken some) Terri said that she just wanted to experiment a little & that he's had more sexual experience than she did, here's the thing; that's what you do when your single--experiment, when you're married you can't go out & experiment with other people--that's called a cheating ass bitch! She wasn't a virgin when they got married & even if she was she still couldn't go around fucking strangers .... I find that this slut is just as stupid if not more than her whore partner crystal, here we have a woman who brags/ claims that she loves her husband, her & her husband have an excellent sex life, he treats her like a queen, he takes care of her--but this didn't satisfy her--she wanted to "experiment" to make matters worst she had to "experiment" with 4 different guys before she came to the conclusion that sex with her husband is so much better--I think the bitch is borderline retarded. That same religion she tried to use to keep from being divorce-also looks down on cheaters. Crystal is just another gutter slut with 101 excuses as to why she's such a slut, if she wasn't satisfied with her husbands bedroom skills why didn't she talk to him about it? Why didn't she try to spice things up a bit? She claims she loves her husband but I honestly can't see it, she might love him as much as any cheating whoring slut wives loves their husbands but she didn't love him enough to sit him down & say "ED I love you , but you suck in bed, all you do is stick your big dick in me poke around for 10-12 minutes & cum ! then I'm let unsatisfied & sometimes it hurts bad. I Promise you that he would've tried to do better. But she didn't give him a chance, I don't think she wanted to give him a chance because if she did she wouldn't of been caught sucking some guys nasty dick in a backseat of a car. Crystals argument with Jason about Terri's love is bullshit, all cheating cum sluts have the same mentality /argument, in there mind it's just sex, it didn't mean anything, they love their husbands but they were feeling old & unattractive, they just wanted to try something new--blah blah blah! It's pure bullshit! Jason should've asked crystal would her argument still hold merit if she found out that her husband Ed has been picking up bar whores & fucking them behind the alley? Women don't like to think about another woman riding their dicks (I know I don't) but it seems to be ok for them to share the pussy. Crystal was just a slut--pure & simple. Terri is just a fucking moron, I don't understand why if she just wanted her husband to fuck her insides out why she didn't just say so? All women wants to get fuck'd hard once in a while, I don't know any (including myself) who wants their husband to mistreat them & this is what she wanted, she didn't appreciate what she had, she was looking for something that didn't exist. If she really was in search of some new sexual experiments she could've experimented with Jason, it would've been something new for the both of them, like me--I've never had anal sex, it's when my husband & I got married that I was actually scared but interested in experimenting with him. He's never fuck'd a girl in her ass so we thought it would be a new experience for us both; I didn't go around fucking others instead of trying them with the man I love. I think Terri just wanted a different dick; it had nothing to do with spicing up her marriage it had to do with spicing up her life. Marriages can get stale, that's why it's a good idea to check out the adult stores at least once or twice a month. My husband & I don't want things to get boring & predictable so we try different things. I have a friend who actually sucks her hubbies toes --yuck! Not going to happen, the point is no matter how long you've been together its always nice to bring some new/different/wicked things into the bedroom. I love experimenting with the hubby, I've done things with him that I've never done with anybody I don't even like being touched by anyone but my hubby so I can't understand how a married woman can go out & allow some dipshit to fuck them. It would've made my skin crawl. When you get married your not suppose to still want to live the single life, otherwise why go through all the hassle? I absolutely love love love pru's character, I thought she was hilarious & she sounded pretty fucking hot from your discription... I thought I was going to die when she told Jason to let her kill Terri. Ha! Terri wasn't as batshit crazy like most of your dimwitted slut wives characters which I've missed a little bit. Anyways awesome story ... Your an excellent writer, I love your work.

Like I've said before, you do this type of story pretty much better than anybody. Good job, enjoyable read.

Hey - no shit, Sherlock!

I don't often read 7-pagers, but that one was well worth the time (Mind you, it didn't leave me enough time to read the comment from Danger09!).

It may have been pushing it a little bit to put it here instead of Erotic Horror, for example - but I'm glad you did, because I'd have missed it in there!

Great fun and first-class story-telling.

Glad I didn't! This was entertainment!

Straight road

That rooster

Done crowed

Flat tire

Homemade cross

You know I feel like a preacher waving a gun around.

There is no metal armour ever made that will stop a quarrel at under 100 yards. Never fired a crossbow at kevlar maybe that would stop it. European style armour just can't do it. Not the finest Milanese Plate could. Aside from that loved this Halloween treat and gave it a *****.

You're pointing out a problem with a crossbow piercing metal, yet you ignore the story line of it being against a Vampire! now that is too funny

I'll take this for what it is, Halloween entertainment. And entertaining it was!

Sure would've liked to see real life versions of the Sisters though. Where did that come from, Stang?

Ramble ramble ramble jump swerve ramble random ramble ramble... Negative six stars.

Not dark enough for a horrific All Hallows Eve but a good Trick or Treat for Halloween.

Terrific read. Well-written, and humorous. I especially liked how you referenced previous stories. One thing I didn't like was all those Apple products! iSheep with all due respect. Anyway, keep up the amazing work. Can't wait until the next story.

but I finished 7 pages so I must have liked it. 5*****. Thanks.

tom anon

Enjoyed it.

The story that it was just sex and did not mean anything, is a constant theme. My own memories is that sex has a binding effect and increases your bonds. In fact I remain of the opinion is that you are best off keeping away from it until you are ready to bond.... You can pick up all the experience you need on Literotica....

Thanks for the read!

Thanks for sharing a super story!!!

I have to be honest and admit that your last few stories haven't really fired me up, but this was great - fantastic - 5 star material!

if one phase isnt accomplished....there are more passages to pursue TK U MLJ LV NV

Stories here -

Fun all the way through - painful - yes - but still a fun story with a great concept.

Perfect for the season and Penance is perfect - well a bit chicken shit - but perfect heh.

You gotta love the Prius was a choice made by God cause he loves Stang's too rofl -

Nicely done, gratefully received,

Sort of cutesie... not my kind of story, even with tongue in cheek. Would've been 2 stars...maybe 3 or even 4 because, once again, you're YOU! It was the one simple (afterthought?) line about the homeless guys after the vamp's defeat, asking each other for change, that stuck a sword in me, tickling my thoroughly EVIL, black comedy loving (see: Catch 22, Where's Papa, etc.) sense of humor; that immediately got this to 5 stars. So, okay, I admit it, a little BAD humor in the story works on me like BLACK MAGIC!

BTW: I was expecting this to end with the father not really believing the story and Jason admitting that it WAS b.s., but he's STILL kicking his cheating daughter to the curb. I guess I really AM as mean & evil as I said. I read this on 11/1; so I wish you a fun & happy Halloween, 2013.

You got a lot in this one, even though it still fits your formula. Wonderful!

OldMarineVet

Especially the SoF Patience & Prudence - Stangster coulda had Pru tell our Hero 'Tonight You Belong to Me' at some point late in the tale. Better, maybe sing it to him!

5*

Loved the line about getting the smell of chevy off of him,classic line.Interesting that terri didn't want a divorce for being catholic yet didn't understand that the church doesn't exactly think cheating is okay.She found out too late that the grass isnt greener on the other side of the septic tank.

Danger09,if you think catholics can take birth control pills or use condoms under xhurch teaching they aren't supposed to (note that most catholics ignore the church on that one)

You should start a Sisters of Fate series, where an ever changing, or rotating lineup of sisters become soiled, sullied, and otherwise victimized by evil perverts.

But in the end they will win out (violently of course) over evil, regardless of how much decadence and debauchery they were subjugated to.

A very twilight type of story with the vampires and other spooky characters and with very imaginative writing.

Fantastic !!!

Thanks for the read.

Loved the story....interesting twist with Nuns and Vampires... never seen that theme before. Always have time for your stories!

This genre from SS, is an unexpected delight. Playful, tender, powerful, scary, suspenseful, loving; it's all here.

Stang, this was way different from your normal stuff. The writing was good, as usual, but the supernatural characters and actions went beyond my interest zone. Another thing I just couldn't suspend from my consciousness as I read was how long and tedious the narrative was as an explanation to dad-in-law of all that happened. Were I dad-in-law sitting there I would have been unable to stay awake.

I have read all of your stories - good and bad (mostly good 5 stars). Before you berate a Cevy Volt learn about it. It goes roughly 40 miles on a charge. Although I have gotten up to 86 miles. It does have a 9 gallon gas tank that increase the range to 350 miles between gas stations. Oh, and just like a Mustang it is made in the USA, which helps keep Americans working.

Because my most favorited stories in LIT from 800Ibgorilla's "A Beautiful Wish" and from sirreadalotsalot10's "Outlander" so 5*****.

I would have dropped it down to 4**** due to the Chevy bashing (Corvette owner here) but I just couldn't because the story was that damn good.

Stang, you really have a great imagination. I really enjoyed reading this story. I was wondering, though....where did the Shaman on the beach with strong winds come from???? (I'm being facetious here--remember last years Halloween story). Loved it. Keep on using that very active imagination and writing what fills it.

SS, you've done it again! Thanks for this excellent, if different, story.

Love the "bit" of taking at least three Showers after riding in a Chevy.

Sounds like something a Chevy Man would say about Ford.

This would make a really fun movie.

Thanks for the read

OLDED

I admit I wasn't expecting a story quite like this, but this might have been your best story yet! I'd love to hear more adventures from Jason and Pru in a sequel, but at the very least how about another adventure from the Convent?

I for one do not believe a Chevy Volt has the speed, power or physical integrity to damage a vampire.

Terrible editing.

i can tell you from personal experience that a Government motors volt can get up the the needed speed just by dropping it from 10,000 fee and every volt owner should prove me right by doing just that with their volts.

damn funny story i must say. 5

to get the references to other stories from this site. Loved the shaman and witch that the sister ran into from their own stories!

this was just awesome

Not only did the cheating wife get read her walking papers, but this story had everything I love. Sexy nuns- one sweet, one feisty, and one wise, It had swords which are my mustang obsession, and it had vampire killing; cuz ever since twilight I cant stand vamps or obsessive vamp fans. 5 outta 5

I don't understand critical comments for a story like this. This story was just nicely-done (5+) fictional fun. It must be good since the 2nd read produced a smile just like the first.

This started out very strong but seemed to too silly at the end. Thanks. The quality of the writing and editing was superb.

You can always count on ebay to have high quality samurai swords-ha ha! Mustangs, iPhones, cheap assed knock off toy swords- do you always go for low quality gear on eBay just because it's fashionable? Stop following trends and set a few of your own. Stop buying low quality stuff just because its shiny, and everyone else has one, and buy something that actually works and has a use.

Great story by the way! Fun and not serious. Just a well written diversion, except for all the commercial breaks sponsored by Apple and Ford.

I'm not sure how I missed this when it was posted. I enjoyed reading it.

Thank you.

The sword swinging warrior is still driving a mustang and that means his new ex nun wife will soon be be spreading her long legs for other guys until the clueless cuck trades his stang for a mercedes or even a ford truck. Something mystical about those mustangs seems to put horns on their owners.

Why do these cheating wives think that it's fine for THEM to "experiment" with other guys, but if the husband gets a little strange they turn the shark divorce lawyers loose on them!

Thank You StangStar06! A most entertaining and enjoyable story. I do hope there are more Pru and Jason stories lurking in the twisted dark recesses of your mind. :)

you have a twisted mind and imagination ! nuf said Scotty

about a wimp................................... VAMPIRE!

WOW! This is a Wonderful story of love betrayal and kick the bad guys ass! And with an eco friendly Chevrolet ( WHAT IS THE WORLD COMING TO) THANK YOU. for Your fantastic stories "love em".........Love you all! Bye. Greg. Oh 10 stars = 100 %. Bye.

That was some good fun!

But highly sacrilegious.

Get off the speed pills.

But highly sacrilegious!

Everybody knows SS06 is a good writer.

But fantasy is where he excels.

Even being not a fan of fantasy stories,

I still loved this one!

Top ratings from me.

This was a marvelous story: clever, funny and just the right length. You definitely have a way with words.

I'm not even Catholic but I could get into hot nuns and this one wasn't even short with big tits and fat ass. Don't suppose she'd dress up in a French maid outfit? I mean she does wear a cream filled Dunkin Doughnut uniform. No snow or rain to hide the Pony from, at least he didn't total a Jeep in this one just one poor, innocent Chevy. My only complaint is there were way too many quotation marks used. Other than that a good, fun, rockin' fantasy story. Not quite as rousing as Fantasy Fest in Key West but than again who reads fantasy stories in Key West? Dirty Penance with a 357. No matter what, some shitheads just couldn't just sit back and enjoy, still the majority wins. Signed: BTW

I loved this story and the last one, hope you have more coming out.

Good story, but the decision to use quotation marks everywhere for his retelling leads to some terrible legibility.

Pity the vampire didn't get Jason.

What were you smoking when you dreamed up this story???

Finally!!!! We know that herby mustang was a spirit of his death first girlfriend!

Pages and pages of monologue is an absolutely terrible way to tell a story, but if you’re going to do that at least keep track of who is talking to whom. No man would tell his father-in-law in great detail about how he fucks the FIL’s princess.

Hey, I liked it! Although maybe Bangin' Buffy might have been a better title.

But really, you couldn't have smashed up a Mustang?

Great story! Love this whole universe with the Sisters of Fate... and others. Great job again. Thank-you

Loved it.

Fun story , thank you

5 Stars for sure on this one

Freaking awesome i love the nun stories. Kinda out of order for me but still great.

When SS06 is good he is among the best.

I’m pretty sure if he strung these stories together and took out the graphic sex he could write a best selling novel.

A retired Sister of Fate is working at Dunkin’ Donuts? Seriously?

Perfect ;-) Super fun and entertaining story.

Cute story! Original and, honestly, a personal fantasy to ditch my fat ass wife who cheated on me with food and cut off sex. Now, to find a 5' 11" blonde Amazon goddess to call my own.

Great story, loved it

5/5