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Anonymousalmost 14 years agoGreat
Thank goodness for older nurses. They sure know how to provide TLC.
Boyd
Scurvydog44035almost 14 years agoSurprised
I liked the story alot and I found myself amused by the ending. I found that it suprised me and I finished with a amused smile. Thankyou.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI should've seen it coming, but...<g>
Nice story. I should have seen the ending twist coming, but I didn't, and that's OK.
Socially_Ineptalmost 14 years agoA nice read
It was a sweet little story.
I like your sense of humor at the end.
Good job!
Pistolpackinpetealmost 14 years agoThank you for the chuckle....
skateboarding is big in Oregon, I guess empathetic nurses are too. Or maybe guilt?
Tavadelphinalmost 12 years agoTelegraphy is an old technoloigy and is very reliable -
When the two spoke in the hall I suspect most people got it - but still a lot of fun to read it through - it did not HAVE to work this way heh
Anonymousover 10 years agoa nice little story
with a surprise ending....can see him ending up fucking mother and daughter....life is going to be fun
etchiboyabout 5 years agoI did not see that one cumm... I mean coming.
Funny!
Waffling between 4 or 5-stars
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