All Comments on 'Skinned Knees'

So nice that you took the time to develop your characters.I enjoy a story where the people dont just fall into bed like horny rabbits!

It's highly implausible that a paralegal would NOT be able to find the father of her child, get support payments and visitation...trust me.

If ANYONE could find a father and get them to court to fulfill legal obligations, it would be a paralegal...if your purpose is to make the guy a lout, then the mom should have been ANYTHING ...but a paralegal. I know it's a story, but making the mother a waitress or something like that would have made her more sympathetic.

that's why I had her work for "a business law firm" as opposed to a practice that would take cases involving custody, child support, or family law. Besides, we don't even know if Mandy knew the father's complete real name. I didn't go into how she wound up in bed with him. If it was a one-night stand (she was probably about twenty when she conceived), she may have gotten caught up in the moment, or she may have been too ignorant to get the sperm donor's info until he was long gone. We all did dumb shit at that age!

Sorry if that got in the way of your enjoying the story, but thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.

I really enjoyed your story; the sex was well worth waiting for and the characters seemed quite believable. Frankly I don't think the issue of her being a paralegal makes much difference: she strikes me as someone who might well prefer to not share raising her son, especially with a guy who so obviously didn't care about her or the child. Nice job!

Thank you for your story. I feel it was written quite well, you certainly have established the characters and what they want to do. I enjoyed it, it made me hard and horny - please write more chapters.

This story can have many angles to it and be even more arousing and enjoyable.

Maybe Mandy would like to be bathed in cum or be a good fuck buddy for now.

Keep writing and it will get even better !!

I guess some people have to pick things apart, what was so obvious to them I chose to over look and enjoy the story. I look forward to more with the same characters. Keep writing.

What a wonderful story! Well written my friend unlike many of the suck and fuck stories on this site. It was BELIEVABLE! One of the best. Now I'm going to see if you wrote any others. I do hope so.

I enjoyed your story. I too felt that it was 'believable', and the characters seemed like reasonable, rational, real people. A nice change from some of what I've read just recently.

about 2 people, who look as if they found something they were not really looking for....LOVE.

Thank you for the time and effort to write a wonderful story.

Is there a sequil?? might be able to see it happening.

PTBzzzz

The fact that Mandy was a paralegal and didn't know where the father was is understandable and logical, if you consider she was young when she became pregnant, possibly at one night stand in college at a frat party with lots of booze.

We also don't know when she became a paralegal, though likely after she was a mother with child and had her mother babysit while she returned to school to support herself and child and quite likely wanted to seek out a place of her own rather than live in her parent's home. It's also possible once she was living on her own with her son that she had too little information about the son's father to track him, didn't want or need the hassle of proving paternity to him or the ensuing legal costs, and simply felt her life was better without him because she had a son who was devoted to her and she to him and their lives were comfortable and happy for the most part without him or his support. It was her choice to make and we should not judge it as it was her decision to make.

Meeting GI Joe added a new dimension to both of their lives which each lacked and needed particularly when they were so compatible and sensitive to each other's needs and emotions. In time I could see each of them using the Buddy with Fringe Benefits for a period of time but each realizing that they wanted a much deeper relationship because of their compatibility. Good Relationships that last form slowly and are not rushed allowing each party to learn the idiosyncrasies of the other partner while enhancing the other's positive qualities lovingly, openly, and often in subtle ways.

I found both characters true to life and most enjoyable to follow and though the piece may be ended in the author's mind, I would encourage him to consider a future chapter or chapters which continues this story and their relationship whatever it may be.

It is rare indeed for a writer here to actually create characters that have a little depth to them.

I found myself hoping that they would "find" the time to get together.

Looking forward to more of this story...

This is a very good story, needs more chapters

Jerry in Washington State, USA - I enjoyed this story on several levels. Being a military retiree after over 20 years of service, I enjoyed the military history. I liked the main characters and their actions felt real and reasonable to me. What Joe and Mandy have just shared doesn't necessary mean they'll develop a closer, more permanent relationship - but I would much enjoy a sequel that would explore that possibility. Thanks for an excellent, well-written, enjoyable story in which I can like and respect the main characters and their decisions.

I really enjoyed this story. It wasn't a slam bam, thank you ma'am type of writing that makes up the majority of the stories I read. The author isn't in a hurry to brag about his enormous cock and the ecstasy it brings to women. I liked the pace. I agree with other commentators who suggest more chapters.

Thank you. The story was nicely paced, well-structured and ultimately satisfyingly erotic, leaving us wondering what comesnext for them. Good pay-off with the skater kids too.

This was a wonderful, well-written story that I thoroughly enjoyed. Would love to see more like this. One of my most favorite ever.

I really enjoyed this story a lot. Very well written.

My "friend" who commented here, and on a bunch of my other stuff, on October 15, 2012, is apparently not a fan.

It wouldn't surprise me if I knew who he was -- another writer who is nice enough to me when we're both logged-in on the other website where we submit stories, but who stabs his fellow writers in the back when he can. He's one of those guys who takes himself WAY too seriously.

Buddy -- we're writing porn and submitting it without payment to an internet site, using FAKE names. This is a hobby, a way to have fun, to express ourselves, and to entertain, isn't it?

Thanks for the "1" rating. I wish you had actually read the damn thing.

The character development made it such a great story! It's so much more realistic with all the background info! 5/5!

I am just going to repeat what nearly all of the earlier commentators have said.

That was a damned good job !

I would like to see more chapters. Do they cintinue to be fuck buddies? What happens after he gets his degree?

this is begging for a sequel, more, more, more

8~) ... DKP

For the romantic in me, a bit too real.

It has been long enough for him to have completed his thesis and joined the faculty. How about a follow-on to let them move up and on with their relationship(s)?

the one in which they become a family

cannot wait to read the next installment

Great story I would enjoy reading more

Thanks

Enjoyed it it...very likable characters...autobiographical..?

Believe I've read/enjoyed some of your other work...will check

pity about the troll

very likable story to short for my taste should have had him finish and the two of them get married her boy already loved him ? I gave it a four only for being too short

Would love a sequel, so many different ways that it could go. Could stay a romantic story and have them get married, could go with heartbreak and finding love with someone else. I am sure there are more possibilities that could be explored. Still, as is, I loved it. 5*

[06.11.22]

Fun und Zsexxsi!

111/10 Skinned Knees!!!!!

[06.11.22]

Fun und Zsexxsi!

111/10 Skinned Knees!!!!!

Good story, was hoping to find a sequel.

Could have used a bit more depth, but still a good tale.