All Comments on 'Skinny Dipper'

I don't know of this is just a male fantasy—I hope it is only that. A woman is not going to take pleasure from being raped or have happy memories about it.

This belongs in Non Consent, certainly not First Time.

No girl would want to lose her virginity under coercion. This a male rape fantasy and I fail to see the eroticism.

What a waste of time. She said NO you should have left it at that. Troubling the recent proliferation of Rape stories recently. This was not punishment it was Rape pure and simple. You should be a little more sensitive, to your female readers some of whom have endured the horror of Rape. I can assure you from first hand experience it was no fantasy. I certainly found none of it pleasurable. You should go back to add RAPE to the tags for the story, or weren't you proud enough to let everyone know you are a would be RAPIST? If you are thinking about it enough to write stories about Rape the next step if you haven't already done so is the actual thing. If you haven't already get some help, you are sick and disgusting. I won't be reading anything written by you in the future.

Signed "Jeannette a girl who found no pleasure in her own Rape"

We know virtually all Literotica stories are fiction. We know Ashon always writes humorous rape stories, and in my view writes them well. Okay, maybe it ended up in the wrong category, but it seems there are a few people around who make a point of reading his stories just so they can complain about them. Get a life!

All rational people agree that rape is wrong ,but this is just a story and well written at that .

The writer is fucking sick in the head

There is nothing funny about rape. It is disgusting. If it had its own category, it would be easier to avoid this crap. Ashon is one sick fuck.

This would be better if she met a lovely handsome guy, her age, who fucked her nice and gently and the pool became a special place for them where they fuck! A thirty year old man raping a young girl over and over makes me feel sick!

First, this is only a story, a figment of someone’s imagination unless the author claims the story is true. I didn’t see that disclaimer in any part of the story and even if there was, you’ll need to keep reading in hopes you’ll understand Mattie enjoyed her experience so much she went back for more, many more times!

Second, I don’t believe anyone who was really raped would be reading sex stories on Literotica so that places anonymous – Jeannette’s comment in a precarious position.

Third, reading and comprehension is taught, starting in kindergarten and advanced through all thirteen years. Any intelligent person reading the story will see Mattie, even though she’s a virgin, is bucking her hips up to meet Fred’s thrusts. Below I’ll point out some points that the RAPE complainers obviously missed.

“She gasped at the way it built on her arousal, excitement building on excitement, lifting her higher. She couldn't hold it together. Her whole body was trembling and bouncing under Fred's driving need, matching his need with an even greater one of her own.”

"You're going to ravish me again?" she asked.

"I have to make sure you've learned your lesson. Everyone knows a lesson must be repeated to really strike home."

Mattie looked at the hand covering her breast and slowly relaxed. Obviously he was holding her down and there was nothing she could do. She'd just have to wait and take whatever he dished out. She shuddered nervously, excitement already stirring.”

AT THE END OF THE STORY, it’s obvious to this reader and should have been to all the other readers that Mattie went back to see Fred many more times.

When Mattie was talking to her friend Rose at the end of page 1 she said, “Mm. That's the guy. Do you know that if he decides to teach you something he keeps making you practice it, day after day."

So all you who cried rape owe Ashon an apology….. ghezzzzzzzzz!

I'm also an author on Literotica -

Not consent - it was rape

Keep your rape fantasies to yourself.