All Comments on 'Skylar's 21'st Birthday'

The story itself was intersting, but the author need to learn to spell. I would suggest an editor and proof reading before submitting.

That may be, but it hurts your argument when you can't spell grammar.

this story is one of the best i've read in a while.

higly recommended.

very natural, good sense of what the woman is experiencing and very well narrated overall.

look forward to more of this kind!