All Comments on 'Slave Fantasy Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THIS STORY IS OFF THE VOTING RADAR. IT IS SO HOTT AND GREAT.. PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE. FOREVER A FAN

ebony_divaebony_divaover 16 years ago
WONDERFUL!!!!

THIS STORY IS WONDERFUL. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY.

mrskelleymrskelleyover 16 years ago
Wonderful!!!!!

Great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Okay

This time you don't get the 100, because the 'oooooooohhhh's' and such are just killing me. It's a shame, because the story is really good otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Five stars

But this would be so much better with fewer loooooong sound effects.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
EEEEEEEEEEEEEENNNOUGH

I suffered through the first one hoping the comments would encourage you to edit successive chapters but this one only got worse, I'll skip chapter 3

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