All Comments on 'Slave for a Day Pt. 01'

by mrmark83

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Short warmup

Waiting for the rest of the story, good warmup though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Great start! Can’t wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Need more.... desperately

Please write more.... soon

oldtwitoldtwitover 5 years ago
Dreams

Oh boys dreams.......

Good start and room for so many chapters to follow...

SOON I HOPE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Maybe you should change the title?

How to Lose Your Girlfriend in One Day?

This shows definite signs of a wannabe Dom or possibly wannabe clueless Dom.

I really hope I’m wrong *sigh*

mrmark83mrmark83about 5 years agoAuthor
RE: Above comment....

This is a pure fiction story, you seem to be taking it very seriously?!

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