by eroslit
I liked your good erotic story but I wished it was a little longer. I wanna hear more pleaz!
I enjoyed your story, but think more details would help the intimate scenes. Hope you plan on continuing with more chapters. What happens during the rest of their ride? what happens when they get home? Etc.
Need to be longer and lets us know what happen on the rest of ther trip and when they got home
Please finish it on the second round! Would be a 100 if their was some finality with the trip and when they got home.
Thanks for writing!
sexmate
I loved your story but would like to hear more--maybe mom will get involved? Thnx again for your time writing this--Doug
What a great story, I hope you continue. And a great picture also.
Bil
You are an excellent writter. I could not stop masturbating while reading this story.
Very erotic. I hope for a continuation where Karen gets pregged by her daddy....
very nice storie even better daughter all she needs know is a long hard and deep fucking to make her daddys lil bitch.thanks -hotusty-EMAIL llessur4fun@yahoo.com
Great descriptions, realistic set up, very good delivery. Makes me want to climb in a sleeping bag with someone.
what can i say another one of your gems......you know how to get a guy excited...more
My uncle Bruan and I were hiking the Appalachian trail. My tent got damaged when I fell and two poles cracked. We had to share his very small tent. By the end of the night he was spooning me. I woke up to a nice thick cock poking me in the ass. My pussy got so wet. I reached down, slid off my panties and eased back onto his dick. God it felt so fucking good as it slipped inside. He woke up as I was pushed about halfway down onto him. He grabbed my hips and sunk all the way in. I lost my virginity in the middle of the woods to my uncle. For the next few years we always had a couple of trips a year. Then I went off to college. I think I will call uncle Brisn and see if I can come stay with him.
Wow! I think Anon's story got me as hot as the story!! Picturing one of my cousins sliding her tight pussy down on my hard cock while Im sleeping! :)
Wow I absolutely loved it. This is a very plausible and realistic story. One of the best I have ever read.
Makes no sense at all. You seem to forget that they are in their own individual sleeping bags