by EricBanner
That was so erotic and just my taste (pun intended LOL)
Please write another chapter
No plot, no story, no character development - but what a blast! Men who don't have sisters always kind of wish they did, and this is the reason why. Surely all sisters are this hot and willing, right?
Yes, no special plot, but very good, it has a feeling of "real"..
I hope that the sequel will be at the same level
Loved the way you used suspense and tension. You really made erotic with that I reckon! Good work mate!
We need more stories like this. Most of these stories are just some cheesy I fucked my mom crap, and it gets boring sorthing through it all.
What a hot sexy story! I love to wake up and find a lover making love to me. Your story captures this feeling in a wonderful way. Really sexy. I am fingering myself just thinking about it.
- Dana
Right on. I touch my wife, she rolls over the other way. Some people have all the luck !!!!
That was awesome, its almost my exact fantasy. It was just ridiculously hot.
Loved this very sexy story. I wish you sneaked into my room each night!!! Keep submiting more stories.
eric that story really related to me...all the emotions and suspense i've been through it all...but only with my sister's friend....it takes me back to when i was a teenager
I tried this with my sister when she was a teen, only touching her virgin cunt on the outside, only once, i did`nt dare try again, how i regret that now! Please write more of this stuff.
All stories should be like this. It's nothing special, but well executed and thought out.
Excellent submission, I'll be reading more of your stuff if there is any!
I am not a big fan of sibling incest, but your two stories have gotten me so hot. Let's just say a certain female friend better stay away from me if she doesn't want me fucking her anymore. God I am horny!
quite a pity you didn't follow up on this, you have talent.
one of the best "sleeping" stories !!
keep it up, greetz from Germany
Write anthoer chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!! this story it hot uuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh............. I'm cummmmmmmmming
I have been reading stories on this site for 3 days straight and I haven't left a comment until now....
This is absolutely one of the BEST fucking stories I have EVER read in my life. You did such a great job at describing everything. I hope there is more to come.
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
great story indeed just kind of let me down when he found out the sister did the same I would of love he continue to do stuff etc. Bit that's just me it's still a awsome story
I'm hoping this turns from naughty fun to life long romance,
these two need the happiest of ending's.....
this was a waste of time no real background and no end equals a half assed story by half assed writer. half a story (and this was less than half) is worse than no story at all either finish what you started, find someone that will or delete it but don't leave it as is.
Ignore the previous anonymous, I've seen the same title on alot of post on the same day. A bitter person who clearly has issues. Ignore them, good story and keep it up
This was great to read! :p* I actually fucked one of my sisters while she slept but I actually fucked her. Like my cock deep inside her ass! I loved it. And was wondering if anybody else has had this kind of experience. I'm glad I have cum to find this one! ;p
only an underage virgin would give this crap a rave review. there was no background or character development and no end all we get is a rushed middle. no good in any way half a story ( and this is much less than half ) is worse than no story at all delete and don't repost until you can do it properly and completely.
I think this story was a pretty decent story. I would say that if you just built your stories up a little bit more, and added some teasing it would be one of the best that I have read. You did really well with the sex scene although I agree with the user that said it could use more character building, but hey man I creamed all over my tile floor, so that is good enough for me. I guarantee you could write a story for the top lists with a little more buildup, and I have read all pretty much every top list story in incest/taboo.
I'll buy you a puppy if you write more stories! You're truly talented!
Although its unimaginable to think it could happen, it's a fantastic game to play. Slinking into your bedroom or sisters bedroom and playing these games. The excitement and erotic feelings are overwhelming. Let your imagination have fun while you experience eating her ass or pussy or both. Loved the story, thanks.
This brother and sister were really made for each other - with similar "sleeping" patterns and enjoyments. Hope they have many more encounters! Thanx for the Read.
this is great and i have no problems with the story itself. the only problem i have is that this website has no fucking time of edit's. what i mean by that is there is no time that i can see when he last edited this thing.
Not much to say other than…….
THAT IS ONE HOT STORY!!
And so very well written! I was sitting here getting nervous when he was doing all that moving of his sisters’s limbs. I started mumbling “ get out of there you jerk! You’ ll be grounded’till you’re 65! And that’s if you don’t get committed to some sexual deviant institution, where more than a finger will find its way into your butt!
Just a real good read!
I have to ask, though I doubt I ever get an answer…but was the last sentence an indication this is something they do on a fairly regular basis?
seriously? he didnt fuck her after all she did? maybe a new chapter continuing from this point where he goes after her to her room and they have some fun fully awake and aware