All Comments on 'Slightly, Once Ch. 09'

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JensensloverJensensloveralmost 13 years ago

I never thought you'd do that with them, if they really love each other they shouldn't even consider sleeping with someone else, I can't see how they would last after it, as far as I can tell they're compatible in every way.

bkdarkcambkdarkcamalmost 13 years ago
interesting swerve

can't wait to see how this will play out. keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Can't wait for the next chapter

There are lots of stories with betrayal on this site. What I liked most about this story was the love between the two main characters I hope they find a way....

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