All Comments on 'Slip in the Shower Version 01'

........In so many way!

well actually is sick perverted fuck bubble. Gave it a 5

Nothing more to say - **

I'm usually the first to jerk off to a sick story, but this was absolute rubbish. Please do not reproduce.

You suck ..ur sister is about to die and u say u cant afford an Abulance but u want to grope on her body. There is nothing erotic about this story.

Was that crap sister unconscious & he just fucks her also great to be a American isn't it no money no Ambulance no hospital

I got some bad press for these four stories (I submitted them all at the same time). Firstly, I obviously should have posted in 'nonconsent/reluctance' - the general theme would probably have resonated with the guys over there. Secondly, I wrote these as a sort of experiment, to try to see (through writing) how similar the experience of sex is for girls and guys. So sorry you didn't like them, but I'm afraid these four were more for me than they were for you! Thanks

I enjoyed your stories and they most definitely belong in this category as the main factor of this story is family sex keep up the great work

Idk why you said that you could now see the full size of her tits because she was turned on.....the breast tissue doesn't swell in women unless she is pregnant...

I LOVED this!! i thought you did an amazing job!!! fuck the people who didnt like it!!! I loved it.

The phone was still on, it was muffled but the lady on the phone could still hear them having sex.

my friend died under basicly the same cercomestances the LAST thing i thought of was fucking her . just plain sick.

I don't understand Why people get worked up over stuff like this. You're on an erotic website, expect erotic stories about EVERY situation, including deadly ones!

Just no.

If therapy doesn't work, have your sister duct tape a gun to her hand and your sick head. Once it's all secured have her read your story..... Problem solved.

Letting someone die because you can't afford an ambulance is just evil. Really messed up story.

A rape story. 1 star

I enjoyed this story! Thank you!

That was hot. My guilty pleasures are usually things you're not supposed to do, like incest. I in an almost 20 year open marriage. I like f**king people I shouldn't. I'm grossed out and not attracted to any family members (thank Goodness) but I'm turned on by incest stories. Weird I know. 🤷🏾‍♀️ Literotica is for f**ked up crazy erotic stories and people are pissed about a f**ked up crazy erotic story? Grow tf up. Or go find something else to read.