All Comments on 'Slippery Slope'

Really liked it. Nice buildup and end.

Nice explanation of mom in the beginning and how her getting nourishment was such a contrast. Made for such enjoyable erotic story.

2nd chapter

I loved the build up in this story and I enjoyed the fact you did not have the son instantly attracted to his mother, that he felt doubt and disgust at himself as that attraction developed. Despite the unlikely premise the entire story felt so much more real than most on this site because you made their interactions believable.

The Mom rekindles the feelings she had for her “man”.

A work of art. It looks more like professional writing than porn. I was totally engrossed, and enjoyed it immensely.

I said ,Damn!!! Great Story!!!

A yummy story! It’d be great to read more of it... thank you!

Wish I could of given you a 10. I want to getting caught in a snow storm with my mom if it ends like this.

1 Tiny quibble Mom calling narrator " Honey 🍯 " all the time, every time got to be a bit grating . Alternate his name or a nic for variety Other then that ? DITTO on all previous cum laudes and future ones as well.

Ergo the obvious score !

Full marks *****

Most of the time I don't care for long stories but this one was really good.

great story. definitely require more.

Never really loved long stories but I sure enjoyed this one

Loved it from the gradual build up to the nourishment and copulation. Requires a second and third chapters... Definitely a Five *****….

Well written and well edited. You are a good writer. Plot flows well and the characters are very believable.

Been waiting or it and waiting for it. Every once in a while a really well written story comes in this genre. They are few & far between.

Flat out, this is one of the absolute best written stories in this category, heck maybe on the site. I LOVE that they got pulled into such lust but interrupted! You could feel the tension!

Can you be more descriptive on the underwear next time.....just a small thing that woulda set me over the edge lol

Man this was outstanding, great great work. I look forward to more of your work. Just a great job.

Another one of your amazing efforts.

Nice build up. If there were errors I didn't notice. I took a call from my little sister about midway through and was a little annoyed at the interruption. I don't get annoyed at my little sister - I love her a lot and always enjoy talking with her.

I was prematurely annoyed at the way the story was ending - until the last sentence, that is. If not for the last sentence I would have given two stars, not five. Thank you!

Great story.....hated that danged interruption.....one of the best written stories on this site. Thanks for sharing.

My first reading of your stories. Very well written. You obviously took your time writing and editing this story. Would have been nice if they had finished before the cop showed up. Thank you for your efforts. This is a blue star novel.U

.....but minus 2 stars for the interruption. Sorry. I hurt.

You have great descriptive powers.

I laughed my ass off. Crazy hungry! Nonsense, you can go several days without eating. But NOT without drinking fluids. A huge ejaculate might be 5 ML...FEED MEEEE!!! LOL!!!

great one...

The Ending Phrase was genius

Love it! Sent you a message

Nice build up, the story deserves the 5 star. I was expecting read more steamy scenes at the end. Nevertheless great work, thanks for the this quality of writing.

Excellent!

11/10 'Protein Shakes'!!!!!

Pretty cool (no pun intended) narrative. Loved the last sentence.

That was a great story!!!

Straight in to my favourite folder. Well done Sir. I felt as if I was in the car with them. I would love to read a part two bull will now take a look at more of your work. Thank you.

Off course he broke up with Deanna…my mother was extremely pleased that I broke up with my girlfriend…she was obviously very pleased, almost giggling as she adjusted the straps of her black lace bra…

Loved it