by fantasy69
great 2nd part, i hope you keep this story going for at least 2 more parts. but one thing, slow down a little, a little more teasing is in order. by the final part his mom should be drooling like pavlov's dog for him.
Love your story and the dialog! It's so arousing to hear Mom give in to her forbidden desires and to be a slut. How about adding some sexy fetish like Mom in stockings and high heels? Let her be a total teasing slut!
both parts have been incredibly hot...don't bring the daughter into it yet...several more chapters with just the mom submitting to the son...have her dressing for him, with high heels, thigh-high hose...maybe her submitting to him in semi-public place, etc. keep up the great work!
Keep going. That mom is such a slut. Can't wait to read where she goes next!
Sensational, have read both chapters numerous times, Love the mother submitting, maybe she submits to him out doors with his camera
Cool story can't wait to read more. What if dad and the daughter was't sleep and the daughter had a desire to be use also.
I keep coming back to this story! Its fantastic...Hot as hell!!
Please continue soon.
How about mom and the photo shoot, mom with her daughter after she gets caught trying on her daughter's lingerie, and brother/sister. Wow! There's so much more to write with this story!!!
Please hurry with the next chapter! This story has been making me explode!
the story is good,the plot sucks.why indanger the mom,she being good to him.no common sense.
daughter wants mom,so threesome with son the master of the house.keep everyone out of danger incest is illegal if caught less know better off.
Love the running comentary from mom's mind, the conflict, the desire, the giving in to those desires even though her logical mind says no, the desire to be her son's slut, to be seen by his friends and on the internet. Very creative, very hot, please continue, there are a lot of possibilities!
This is my teen fantasy. i haven't thought about it in years but oh how I wanted to fuck and suck my moomy.
I have just discovered this writer and have to admire his graphic portrayal of this torrid relationship, It is just a wonderful series.
This story is so fucking hot. I'm enjoying reading of her son turning her into the slut she wants to be.
LOVE IT, JUST LOVE IT, THE WAY SHE IS TURNING SLOWLY BUT SURELY INTO A TEASING SEXY MATURE WOMAN, READY TO SHOW AND DO ALL KINDS OF SEXY ITEMS, MMMM
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your story so awesome and love how you start the whole thing out. Cant hardly get thru a whole chapter without....... Top best story i have ever ever read anywhere and I read alot and alot on lit. Think it should win some kind of award. So wished I had a mommie like that. A dream all my life. Had you to favorite and definately will watch your stories! scale of 1 t0 10... nine hundredand ninty nine
Great stuff! Thanks! I have a feeling that old Tommy does not know what he has started by trying to turn his mother into a slut and cajoling her into posing for professional pictures. Before it is all over with, she probably won't even remember him.
The seemingly innocent young son manipulating his mother into becoming his slut is so hot, who couldn’t resist? I can’t wait to see what she is in for.
anyone would do that to their mother should be shot and pissed on fucking sicko.I ever meet you you won`t get up
Sick bastard..if you don't like it, why are you reading it? Sounds like your the one with issues...and please ..meet me, id love to see just how big, bad and tough you really are. Your just a cunt behind a monitor with no balls talking shit.
I hope that he continues to be able to dominate his mom and make her do everything he wants her to do.
Thanks for he read
This has to be best series ever written.... It's our fifth time reading... yes me and my own slut Mommie.... We read it together before I fuck her hard and long.... I just hope someday soon my sister and dad turn out to be like your story :D
Have read all your stories and the slut mommy, submissive and controllable is the best. Would love to read how he took her to his friends and had her service them also. Her description of being used, and recognizing she is a slut is a real turn on.
stole peaks ()
fire place (4)peeks
half way (halfway)
very exited (excited)
Sister (sister)
Daughter (daughter)
god (God) (31)
mantle (mantel) (2)
near by chair (nearby)
up stairs (upstairs)
pulled his shorts down and than his underwear (then) (4)
every time I though (everytime) (thought)
Son (son)
Cumming ( cumming)
deep throat (deep-throat)
showed (-it) to them (them)
daughters bedroom (daughter’s)
Love how the Mother can not help but submit to her slutty feelings. How she allows her son to dominate her and wants and needs him to use her for his pleasure. The thought of him sending her to his friends and wondering how she will perform for them
ignites the imagination also.
This story lights my erotic fire. Who cares about nearby or near by? I was so worked up I couldn't have spelled 'it' correctly without a dictionary while reading. At first the repeated use of 'slut' cooled me off a little, until I got it, it was in the title. She's attempting to resist becoming one while being so seduced by being one that she hasn't got a chance. Does the apple fall far from the tree? God, I hope not. By got to read the next chapter.
Get some good closeup gear and a speculum the next time you take some pics of your moms hole.
Now that's ah mommie. Wish I had one when I
was younger. HOT story well done.
....THANKS....
I am a widow for over 2 years.
I let my son and his friends fuck me when we went camping at the river.
They seduced me and take turn massage me after a hot swim.
I was so wet, dripping.....
Gosh, it was the best moment in my life, so turned on and afraid of neighbors caught us, made me cum and cum.....
Mommie is turning into the GREAT SLUT!!!!!!!!!Just wait until you get that dick dancing around inside your ass... you will singing the MOANING song with some heave breathing!!!!!! don't forget you got to taste that juicy daughter soon also!!!!!
(6/2/2022) Okay, this was a hot chapter but I'm disappointed with the Tommy character. He's selfish and reckless. He doesn't see or maybe doesn't care about the obvious danger of putting his mommy slut out there outside the family. He's going to lose his mommy slut and reck his family on a whim. Is that where this story is going; she becomes a total slut and fucks everyone in sight? That would end it for me. Sorry, I'm into relationships and happily ever afters. Keep her as HIS slut and make her happy, I say.
Exciting, but you need someone to proofread and edit your work, again you are using properly spelt words but in the wrong context, spellchecker is giving you the correct spelling but not the content(context).
An amazingly hot story and I look forward to reading more of this series. Unfortunately, the proof reading is Terrible with many spelling and grammatical errors. Some people say that this should not be an issue but it really detracts from my pleasure in reading a story.
I just found this story and find it exciting and looking forward to reading more. The Tommy character is self centered and single minded in lusting for his mother. He is being led by his hard cock into putting his mother at risk, who will bring the sister to climax first her mother or her brother; I think her mother would like to be the one.
I just love mom/son stories in which the mom is submissive slut to her son! This series is super hot. Loved it.
I would not be sharing the photos of my mom with a magazine. But.... there are things I would do to push mom's boundaries.
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the story continues to get even hotter as the hotmom turns into her son's slut even more so.