All Comments on 'Slut Mommie Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
AMAZING!

Undoubtedly one of the hottest stories EVER posted on Literotica!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
The saga continues

An excellent continuation of the saga. I hope the next installment comes soon. Magpie agrees.

workingforthemanworkingforthemanover 16 years ago
More please!

Great addition to the series. I can't wait for the next chapter!

workingforthemanworkingforthemanover 16 years ago
More please!

Great addition to the series. I can't wait for the next chapter!

jackal_manjackal_manover 16 years ago
Nice New Chapter

Hey fantasy. I really enjoyed this new chapter of yours. What I really admire about this series are both the characters and the mom's (Kate's) self-conscious weakness. She knows she shouldn't be doing what she's doing, and it's constantly floating around in the back of her mind. Combined with some well-written action, Chapter 11 delivers the goods.<br><br>It seems as though this series still has plenty of steam in reserve, and I can't wait to see what other pairings come to the surface. With your imagination, I'm sure new chapters won't be a problem at all. Excellent work.<br><br>P.S. Thanks for the heads-up. I've been pretty busy, and I just might've missed this update had you not notified me. Thanks!

TPF1138TPF1138over 16 years ago
Fantastic Once Again

I loved this Chapter. So fucking Hot! Kate and her daughter are a pair of fantastic little Sluts. Brilliant!

Looking forward to seeing more of Betty. And bring back Tommy. Its been too long since he gave his Mom a good seeing to, not that she's hurting for attention it has to be said.

Thanks Man!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Superb

This is by far and away the best series of stories I have found on the internet - it is just a shame they come along so infrequently - Fantasy69 you are truly, truly talented, thankyou so much and more please!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Love it

I agree with everyone else, an amazingly good series. I hope you continue, especially now that the daughter, has come into the picture. Hope you continue, because I think I know where this is going, and can hardly wait for that chapter. Keep them coming.

KarpinskiKarpinskiover 16 years ago
With all the flaws, still surprisingly hot

For "loose" read "lose". For "than" read "then". And how come Kate has panties in the sex shop when she left them in the restaurant restroom? And with all that and no realism anywhere, it still turns me on every page. The writing is not top rate, but the erotic effectiveness is amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Keep going!

Mate, definately need to know what happens next! Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Super Mom

What a Mother! Every girl shold have one just as hot and as understanding. Life would be so much better for everyone now wouldn't it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago

I HATED Frank, disliked the public sex, REALLY Hated the sex with strangers, and the "i tried to stop myself but couldnt" got very repetitive and predictable. towards the middle-end, there was a tad bit much lesbian sex; not enough balance. other than that, BEST SERIES EVER!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great Series

Cannot wait until the next installment. It has been too long since the last. I would like to see Tommy get back involved as well. Looking forward to reading more, more, more!

windowshopper42windowshopper42over 14 years ago
Pick Of The Litter

I've read all the way through Chapter 17, but I'll have to admit that this chapter is my favorite. Both the restaurant and arcade booth scenes are some of the most intensely erotic moments I have ever witnessed in a story and have inspired my own writing.

David48David48almost 14 years ago
Well I'll be damned!

It's a small world afterall. Only this ain't Disneyland for sure, for sure...

DianisDianisalmost 14 years ago
FAAAAAAAANTASTIC, THE MOM AND DAUGHTER ARE SOOO CLOSE NOW

AND THE VISIT TO THE XXX STORE WAS GREAT, HOPE TO SEE THE BUSTY LATINA IN THE FUTURE

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
One of my favs!

Wow, one of the best stories I've ever read. My three favorite subjects all in one. Public sex, Lesbian sex and Gloryhole sex.

Thanks so much!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
BETTER BUT,

One sure way to minimize errors is to refrain from using words about which you are ignorant. This seems to be the case here:

extremely turn on (turned on)

sun tanning (suntanning)

aureoles (areolas) (2)

aureole (areola)

naval ( navel)

Mother (mother)

Daughter (daughter)

said lauder (louder)

watched me playing with herself (myself)

looks form our waiter (from)

love making (lovemaking)

wide eyed (wide-eyed)

table cloth (tablecloth)

waist band (waistband)

half way (halfway)

sensual dual (duel)

semi erect (semi-erect)

six inched (six inches)

light headed (light-headed)

someone stuck their cock (his)

back yard (backyard) (2)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
awesome (marklill2@bigpond.com)

this is one of the best stories ive read and so much to read

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
suggestion for next chapter

I just cannot wait for kristy to find out her mother and brother are fucking. I think it would be awesome for kate to set it up where kristy thinks it is her father she is fucking but finds out it is her brother and her brother thinks it is gina who is sucking him but it is kristy and do not forget to put Elaine or betty in there as voyeurs

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

one of the best stories ever written...I liked the mom and daughter episode specially.

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