All Comments on 'Slut Mommie Ch. 15'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very good but page 4 seems to be missing (?)

Good story! Keep on going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Better

100, I would give more if I could. This remains the best story on any site I know. Please carry on, I can't wait till kate meets with Tommy's friends, no doubt she will give them what they need. keep up with the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great Chapter

A new chapter within 2 months of the last is just about right. This is probably the most erotic story on this site. I hope you continue this story line for at least 10-20 more chapters at a rate of a chapter every couple of months Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wonderful

for anyone who knows the sinful pleasure of posing in front of the camera nude or exposed, this story brings back those thrills. this is a wonderful story, can't wait to read the rest. thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Intensity is back

Congrats fantasy69. You did a wonderful job to bring back the excitement to the story when it was about to going down after the first brilliant chapters. A porn website for Kate was a wonderful idea which can give you a host of possibilities to keep the story line hot. I hope Tim and Jason act like gentlemen in their relationship with Kate. It's crucial for them to have Kate's respect. At the same time, Kate will be smashed emotionally and morally under the pressure of the undeniable sinful pleasure caused by having nasty sex with these innocent young boys and turning them into thirsty perverts.

I'll be impatiently waiting for the next chapter.

P.S: excuse my broken ESL writing style. ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
what a magician

You are just so skilled at creating these erotic situations that even when theres no actual sex it ends up being hot...you have my fandom

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
excellent!

more more more more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Consistant as always

Keep up the fantastic work on this great series. YOur imagery is spectacular, definately worth the wait.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
What a sotry line

I am loving this serries... i keep comming back to this set and loving it more and more dont stop keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Awesome

Awesome series. I'm hoping for some dp.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Best Chapter Yet

This was the most erotic installment of the series by a long way. The photo-shoot with Kate was simply mind-blowing.

However, one small criticism I have that is becoming more and more prevalent as the story progresses:

Kate is too easy. I know the series is called 'Slut Mommie', but I just wish she was a little more resistant. All it takes is for her to say 'no', and someone to continue anyway. If Kate just needed a little push before fully committing herself, this would be perfect.

Her internal conflict is all very well, I just wish it would materialize in her actions occasionally.

Otherwise, perfect!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Brilliant

Best chapter of series, best series on internet.

=> Best story on internet.

Q.E.D.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Amazing!

Simply incredible, the best yet! This was perfection from start to finish. Can't wait until the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Perfect!!!!!!

Best yet. Please hurry up with the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
so damn hot!

cant wait for the rest of the installments,of this hot story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great, but don't forget...

Your vision of Kate is great. She just can't help herself. And the turn-on of being called a slut. I feel you may be straying just a bit from this central point of your stories. Maybe it's just me. Maybe it's hard to keep focusing on that in a long term relationship (uh, story). Every story on this site is about fuckin and suckin. Yours is one of the few that focuses on psychology--leading up to, and continued during the sex.

This is my first comment on this site, and I only am doing so because this story is important to me (wow, that sounded corny). Anyway, keep up the good writing.

Also, bring the family together more. You've gotten away from that a bit. Afterall it is an incest story.

OM

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Phenomenal Addition to the Series!

How sad am I? Since reading this story on February 10th, I've checked back every single day for the next installment. It's just that good.

Personally, I would avoid making this an all-family affair. I know it appeals to some, but the idea of a mother-son-daughter-father orgy is excessive, and slightly unbelievable. There was an added element of danger when Kate and Tommy were sleeping around behind the family's back. I fear that would be lost if the father was brought into the equation. Kristy is fine, but be sure you don't turn this into a mindless fuck-fest. The stranger sex is kind of appealing to me, as long as Kate isn't too easy about it.

Anyway, keep up the great work! This is the best story on Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Hottest story on literotica

Great series...the hottest story on literotica IMO!!

DianisDianisalmost 14 years ago
FAAAAAANTASTIC PHOTO SHOOT

INCREDIBLE, KATE IS JUST AWESOME, WOWOWOW

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I'd love to see more of this!

This is my favourite series on Literocia - Kate's dangerous, slow and seductive activities with her sons friends are a huge turn-on; I'd love to read more about how those relationships progress!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wow!!

Great story its just to bad that we couldnt see those pictures.

Keep the stories cummin.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
sigh

i was enjoying this story but her whole 'no we must not touch each other' thing is getting old. and gina's character is so freaking annoying.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
MORE OF THE SAME

night light (night-light)

tip toed (tiptoed)

god (God) (38)

not (a) stare session

Mom (mom) (7)

Mom’s (mom’s) (2)

Slut (slut)

Cuming (cumming)

inside of womb (my)

tippy toes (tipotes)

son (a) few minutes

naval (navel) (2)

Daddy (daddy)

plenty of time (times)

aureoles (areolas) (5)

red faced (red-faced)

worst then a cheap whore (worse than)

then (than)

half naked (half-naked)

hard on (hard-on)

up stairs (upstairs)

down stairs (downstairs)

hide and seek (hide-and-seek)

make up (make-up) (3)

saw (a) few weeks ago

makeup (make-up) (5)

feeling (a) little

back ground (background) (2)

tea shirt (T-shirt)

internet (Internet)

you Fucked up (fucked)

fine tune (fine-tune)

backdrop (back-drop)

back drop (back-drop)

eye brows (eyebrows)

ridicules (ridiculous)

half way (halfway)

found the rope so quick (quickly)

glance at my crotch (glanced)

blind fold (blindfold) (2)

body (-on) wantonly (on) display

horse voice (hoarse)

wouldn't (have) expressed themselves

Michael Angelo (Michaelangelo)

it's (its)

un-lady like (unladylike)

half exposed (half-exposed)

quite (quiet)

counter top (countertop)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
more

you just have to get kristy kate tommy in a threeway with gina and or her mom Janine watching

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fantastic story. It's kept me dripping pre-cum all the way through. I've cum so many times thinking of Kate wanting a slut like her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The shoes were ridicules. ''''' SHOE brand, or style?

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