All Comments on 'Smoke on the Water Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great to see you back. Very interesting start to a complicated story but it fits well with your writing. KEEP it coming, somewhere in all this is a clue

teedeedubteedeedubover 2 years ago

Yippers. About time. Great start........

WifeWatchmanWifeWatchmanover 2 years agoAuthor
Next chapter submitted

The next chapter of the story has been submitted, and hopefully will be published soon. My Benefactor patrons on Patreon already have the cliffhanger. If you'd like sneak previews like that, or just updates, go to http://www.patreon.com/IronCrowbar and support my writing. Thanks!

Ravey19Ravey19about 2 years ago

Great start and I thought her death would bring in the FBI as her I'd was false.

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbum7 months ago

I like Laura’s involvement in this plot line. When is Callie going to show her CIA training to help IC?

chytownchytown6 months ago

*****Good opening chapter. Thanks for sharing.

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In an exercise of pure censorship, Literotica published all 5 chapters of my story "Climate Injustice" and then removed them, saying the readers of their explicit sex site(!) want safe spaces from politics(!!) I have published "Climate Injustice" on my Patreon site where the ...

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