by youbadboy
It's a good story short and sweet just like good pussy keep up the good work
This submission was not up to your usual quality work. Yes, it was short, which I personally appreciate, and it was sexy. However, this story was so short that the storyline and character development suffered severely. There was no seduction, foreplay, or other buildup to the actual sex, which has been one of the strong points in other of your stories. Never-the-less, I do find almost all of your submissions to be extremely erotic. I check your list continuously for new submissions, and I hope you continue to write.
I disagree with Jacknife, sometimes all you need is a really good quickie. Well done.
Oh I love reading ur stories, can you please please please do similar themes as Halter top and Bus ride ? My all time favorites.