All Comments on 'Snow Day'

I loved this story! One of the best I have read in a long time. Makes me wish everything in your story could happen in real life. Please keep writing.

This is a great story, what makes it better is that my name is essie ;)

I thoroughly enjoyed your story.

You kept me intrigued throughout the whole story.

Great story. First of yours I've had the privilege to read.

Nicely done.

Looking forward to our next encounter.

but whats his deal? he's got something on his mind, and when she first told him who she worked for, he seemed shocked and definitely wanted to say something. is there a history between Jake and Calvin? but thats not the only thing on his mind either. lots of unanswered questions here. hope theres a chapter 2.

All I can say is write more of this story!!!

Ha! lol... yes please, more please. thank you

Thrilling and captivating story. Hope there is a next chapter

my fiance and I played this story out, without the snow of course, and it was amazing... every moment every orgasm was thrilling. loved it. please continue

Great story! Please continue with this!

I love the way you write. I love the scenarios you make for your characters. This story would have to be my favorite. Please continue with Jake and Essie.

Did a good job, nice length, thx for posting.

I only wish the car accident I was in had brought me a strong, protective lover like "Jake" , instead of years of endless pain and loneliness!

This was so perfect! Thanks for a great story!

What a delightful use of the English language. "Paid homage to her breasts" So erotic, so romantic, so original. Well done SSW

~ ARW