All Comments on 'Snow Day - Submission'

Not sure who Elaine was, at the start of that second page, but otherwise a lovely escalation of the dynamics established in the first chapter. As a (fellow?) shoe fetishist, I'm excited to see where future chapters take these characters. Five stars.

Not a fan of foot fetish, but the story makes up for it as gray continues to fall under Claire's dominance.

Excellent orgasmic erotica!

Wow!

Continuing the same superb standard of the first part.

btw i believe Elaine is a character from one of this author's other great stories. Bit of a 'typo' i guess.

Interesting premise.

But the licking of the boots was more than nothing for me.

And what happened to/with her breasts that she flashed and he admired? Nothing?

Needed dialog about his masturbation once he admitted to doing it. How often? What does he use as stimulation? How often? Does he rush to a cum or does he take his time?

Show me how you masturbate.

Three stars.

A complete load of crap.

As I started reading, I thought "oh boy, another male sub story" but while it was, there was the element of Claire's actual longtime lesbian sub. That part was the best for me- I'd love to find out how Claire and Emily met and got into the dom/sub relationship. Is Emily a daughter figure to Claire? who knows? I'd love a chapter on their backstory.

Good premise, and I like Claire’s interest in his submission, without him ever being her lover. His need to submit to keep her attention is how she toys with him. What will they do with him next?

Very nice story, and very arousing as well

Good story and arousing fantasy. Wondering who Elaine is?

Perfectly written story.

waste of space written by a basement troll