by Tuppenyturtle
Even though somewhat erotic, too mundane a scene. Very little description of he emotions and feelings he experienced.
Good description of actions, but nothing about he was feeling.
Maybe have her tease edging him multiple times, using a mixture of prostate massage and vibrator, until he is totally exhausted, get his cum in a cristal cup and start again, until she empty him completely and he can’t be more stimulated since pleasure is pain. Then to finish have her enjoy the loads snowballing them with him...