All Comments on 'Snowboards & Hot Tubs Ch. 02'

i loved your story, it has romance, sex and a great plot line that younger people can relate to... keep writing

I've read all of your stories on this site, and they are all amongst the best I have ever read. I mean, I find myself wanting to keep reading even after "the deed is done". Keep writing.

Outstanding erotica! Plenty of action, gentle but forceful, open commitment. Definitely a story I'd love to live.

Damn dude! There is something about your stories! Keep it up! You are the best that I have seen on this site!

I gave it a five because the sex was hot, fast and furious. I'd give it a six if I didn't have to read between the lines to realise whose point of view I was in. Great read.

All that me or any one else should have to say it HOLY FUCKIG SHIT!!! THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER!!!!!! I read these just befor I got 2 sleep and they r such a turn on my finger in in my own wet pussy and I am finger fucking myself as I read along with the in and out motion of this story!!!!! It just makes me want 2 get fucked or to suck a dick!!! I really loved the part were the girl has all of her holes filled at the same time!!!! It was such a turn on!!! The only thing missing was a girl geting fucked in her puss and up her ass whill the third boy is sucking her hard boobs AND the second girl French kissing her and to put the cherry on top the last girl would be getting her pussy fingered by the girl getting fucked who is also playing with the third girls boobs!!!!! Now how about that for a turn on!!!

Great just like everything else uve published

..but, hey, great fantasy. Good writing style, but readers would benefit from some transition detail between speakers. Often didn't know who was speaking for a couple of sentences. Distracts somewhat.

one of your most confusing stories so far, but still a very good one

thank you.

Another well thought out and written chapter. I wish there had been more of this storyline but I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination ( memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.