All Comments on 'Snowy's Visit Ch. 01'

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TLMorganTLMorganalmost 7 years ago

Great story!! Looking forward to the sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Superb!!

Absolutely supurb story!!!

samcsam1958samcsam1958about 6 years ago
Well written and erotic. Fantastic!

This is an excellent story. Well written, detailed and erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Astoundingly gentle, dynamic, kind, funny, erotic ....

The excellent details of the progression of events were steadily arousing. The detailed focus on the attitudes of the two very different women was both tantalizing and a beautiful case-study of delicious human lust. The author did not just describe a sexual encounter, he deeply described human nature at its most glorious.

The author's character descriptions were so good that I felt that I actually appreciated who the women were. This leads to my wanting to know if the sexually dynamic, open, and positive relation between Lydia and the Author lasted. It seemed that the communication between them made them two parts of one well functioning machine. Did Lydia remain in his life?

HardBenHardBenalmost 6 years ago
FABULOUS

A great story - SOO erotic and exciting - EVERY man's dream

zooliciouszooliciousalmost 6 years ago
Fun

Really fun story. Great job.

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