by Samuelx
You sir, are seriously in need of a brainwash, and a hefty dose of Thorazine. psyckdrug.
Despite the happier ending than what Dale initially planned, you lost a star from me because of the two uses of a gun. Be careful your interracial stories don't tip into a racist point of view.
I read the first few paragraphs, then I had a look at your bio to see who's writing this garbage. It's really all about race, for you, isn't it? Get over yourself, PLEASE - this is really pathetic.