All Comments on 'The Somali Vampire Empire'

"Someone's got to do it, and it might as well be me. I'm directly responsible for the mess, after all."

Just take your fingers from the keyboard and perhaps read a bit about writing.

I'm interested in where you are going to take this Samuel. It is sad that those who hide behind anonamity feel they have the right to be so rude, but please don't allow cowards without anything constructive to say interfere with your desire to create. You have obviously spent a lot of time and thought on this page alone - I hope the rest develops with the passion that you so obviouly have for your story

Good prologue to what looks like an interesting story. Hope there's more.

This story is very imaginative and well-written. Disregard anyone who tells you otherwise. You have a gift and I'm glad you choose to share it.