All Comments on 'Some Bets You Can't Stand Losing'

by happywriter007

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Stupid

There was no “bet” in this story. Should have been non-consensual.

maxieintexasmaxieintexasabout 5 years ago
Fun Story

Very interesting story! Maybe you could add some female characters who enjoy watching a boxing match; or male characters who want a blowjob.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I guess someone doesn't know

What being repeatedly beaten in the nads is like. Hint, you'll be too busy waiting for an ambulance and sobbing like a little girl to agree to anything. Wtf is this at BDSM?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Neat

Id love a second chapter to this. Maybe his balls are too swollen. Maybe a different guy. Maybe sone handjob or blowjob action

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Nice chapter indeed, another one would be great. The only things you could fix are being more variegated and a little more detailed with the blows. Also it's a bit too short and it's really a pity that you skipped the final 5 minutes instead of using it as the peak of the climax, with some very rough action.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great Story

loved this story - you should add extra chapters - she could arrange for some of her friends to trick him in different ways - maybe use some of the rodent traps on his balls if he doesn't comply

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I would have liked our busty lady to take her sweater off revealing her beautiful breasts to him while she tortured him to at least ejaculate once for both their pleasure

harry_saffronharry_saffronover 2 years ago

I loved the tease and the dom. Excellent plot. Reading this at 6am while my wife sleeps by me with her hand grabbing my cock. I'll jerk off to it later during the day

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