All Comments on 'Somebody Fucked Up - Pt. 01'

Who on earth sleeps in a thong? 😳

Badly written trash that's been written before

Great story and I look forward to seeing part two. Just a comment, it’s been my experience over the last 50 years (I don’t count the first 20, since I didn’t have a clue then) that when things go wrong, 90 percent of the time that’s the number one reason: Somebody fucked up.

Thanks for the story, luisa. 5 stars.

Anonymous 1 & 2 - Dumb & Dumber

This was a fun story to read! There’s not a lot of depth here in the plot, setting, or characters, but sometimes that’s fun, too. Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Ignore the anonymous haters. First of all, they're cowards offering trash comments in anonymity. Secondly, it's highly unlikely they've ever contributed to these forums.

Still looking for part 2 🙂