All Comments on 'Something in the Water Pt. 07'

That Patrick got along for the ride, and I'm glad it's with a nice setting and an even nicer woman.

I second the comment about Patrick finally becoming a man with someone special, and I do hope you plan to continue "Something in the Water" and "The Dark Stone".

I've finished Chapters 8 - 11. I post each of my chapters on Literotica three weeks apart.

If you want to read them sooner, or feel like supporting my writing, you can do that here: https://www.subscribestar.com/rawlyrawls

Thanks for reading!

And everyone else beat me to saying this! :)

Superb chapter, way to go Pat. Hope he tames Donna in future chapters with Susy

Now i look forward to see some Roy and Susy , Pat and Saly , Linda Olivia with David

Haha, I'm glad everyone is so happy for Pat. He's my favorite too. I just finished writing chapter 12 and over the next 5 chapters he gets much more involved in everything. No spoilers, but he has his moments. He has many moments.

Patrick is my favourite too! Glad for him)

apparently you've written all way up to ~15, but we're still ~3 weeks out from #7, waiting on #8.

i get that this is your product, but a regular adhered to delivery schedule is a customer attraction, not a negative.

YMMV.

please & thank you for your consideration.

To answer a question, the timing of each chapter isn't totally under my control. I upload a chapter to Literotica and they review it. Sometimes the review takes only a day or two, sometimes over a week. I try and time it for three weeks, but that always depends on the review process.

thanks for the informative answer...

speaking from experience, that's one of the "features" of an all volunteer platform.

i'll be standing by to wait one.

Out.

Again a very hot chapter. Patrick maybe your favourite and the favourite of several readers, but I would love to read about big (in all departments) David and his trysts with the tall, beautiful and elegant Donna and Suzy. They are tall and surely can take his size more comfortably. And if Davey is a dom and is rough with them, their pleasure would be that much greater.