All Comments on 'Something in the Water Pt. 13'

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rawlyrawlsrawlyrawlsover 3 years agoAuthor
More on the way

Chapters 1 - 19 are complete including the finale. Chapters will arrive on Literotica three to four weeks apart.

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Thanks for reading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Bravo

Excellent as always. Most excited to se your updates, especially for this series!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More descriptive

You need to be more descriptive of what else is going all around in the church. It was an excellent debauched situation & it's too focused solely on the main characters. This is the one chance to see what else is occurring with the townspeople in the perfect setting to tell it.

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