All Comments on 'Something New'

A cheating whore cunt skank wife is born.

Nothing of interest here.

Sophomoric writing suitable to a middle schooler. Minimal character development, no reasoning, no rationale, no plot to speak of.

Just a boring story about an old slut. Don't waste your time, I'm sorry I did.

Enough said 1* Move on

You need to change your name to: Lillyliverednonman!

They crawl out of their holes, post a piece of crap, and crawl back into the slime.

"I'm Yours"....what kind of crap is that, she gets screwed once and totally throws away her life and her marriage....going to grow old alone. Your characters are shallow, without any redeeming value...only thing that could make this story work is when her husband finds her "marked" and kicks her out.

Just some pointless dribble.

happen daily, but for the best, not always, TK U MLJ LV NV

I have to agree with the rest...it lacks foundation, passion and credibility--and therefore isn't even a little sexually exciting.

Typical young male porn fantasy. Woman sees cock and is overcome. It doesn't happen in real life only in porn films.

From a guy who's Bio says he is attached, over 60 and a swinger, ha ha ha ha, sure you are, putz, and a lame story. In real life she would be the one dumped for a younger model.

Extremely disappointing, actually.No woman would react as she did - no matter how strong the urge.

There's nothing new here, just the same story told over and over and over and over ...

The guy was paid $100 up front and promised another $100 upon completion of his assignment.

The story!!!!.

It's more like an overworked scene. And a bad one at that. Enough said.

...that we can't give ratings of zero.

This was truly appalling!

I guess she wanted a divorce. That's one way to get it. I wonder how many diseases she picked up?

1 star

she found her 44 year old sister helping her husband pack. They were closing his second and last suitcase when she walked in the door.

"I told you what would happen if you ever screwed around on him. He's mine now."

"But you're my sister, you can't just.."

"Just watch me, Susan. Just watch me."

Her husband added "I'll be back for the rest of my things tomorrow at 1:00. Don't be here."

And with that, they walked out.

She was served the following Tuesday, at work. During lunch.

Needless to say her kids were more than slightly pissed at her.

The wedding was 6 months later.

Susan wasn't invited.

Another piece of cheap from good old wifeliverman. This one seems to have been completely.panned.