All Comments on 'Sometime Succubus Pt. 01'

Well written and very erotic. Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

Great story so far. I loved your use of the mask to exaggerate the latent dominant persona of your heroine. It's an old literary trick but still a good one.

I'm waiting with baited breath for the next part.

Munchy

I truly loved your well-written, very erotic story and I look forward to its continuation.

Thank you; it's rare to come across such a finely written piece of erotica. Too many writers miss the little details or can't write realistic dialogue and you hit the mark each time.

Thanks again,

This is a great 1st installment to a very good story. I really like the hinted-at antiquity of the mask, and the seeming change in Tres' personality, as if the mask is possessed by a real succubus. Please keep the story going.

Sure! Why not? As good as a story gets! Take a good plot and bring the neighborhood to bed with you to appreciate it. You have me hooked. And bottom line, that's what its about, isn't it?

In Part II, the paragraph which begins "Nina seriously considered crashing." As I read it, that paragraph should refer to Tres, not Nina. Otherwise, a well-crafted tale and an enjoyable read. I got here because of "A Loaded Question". You are, apparently, consistently good.

Very, very ... okay: VERY sexy story. Totally got off on the transformation of mousy, little grad student to vixen on a mission, mm, hm! O, how I wish she were me, ... I wouldn't mind being Nina, either!

Whew. Is it warm in here?

kisses, `phfina

What a good idea this story is nicely set up both characters and fast paced sex.