by Scorpio44
Does this stuff really happen? It's not a sarcastic question. If it does, and I hope it does, I would sure like to find myself in Pete's place, with a woman as hot, adventurous, trusting, sexy and vulnerable as Jan. Pete's "going for it" attitude, his sense of control, pushing limits, and caring for Jan was evident. Thanks for a great story, and for opening a window into one type of D/s relationship.
This is the last of several times I have read this story. I see a little something in it each time, and learn more about D/s relationships each time.
I like Pete and Jan very much. Pete is a confident, strong, assertive, and lovingly controlling man, who treats Jan with respect, passion and unselfishly. Jan goes for it. She takes the biggest risk. She is a hot, dignified, self-respecting, passionate woman, who isn't afraid to seek out the fulfillment of her desire, at long last. Two great characters in a thoroughly enjoyable tale. Thank you.
This is a beautifully written story. I suspect it is a bit too mild for the regular BDSM crowd, but I loved it.
One quibble: there were a few minor typos.
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You have helped me see what it is I am seeking. Thank You for more than You are aware of.<br>
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I love the way Pete shows how a woman can be dominated and still showed respect; and the ways in which she will be dominated and what is expected of her in return if the 'game' is to become real and binding.<br>
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I will be reading this story again and again!
Dear Scorpio44,
You have made a fan of me for sure! The stories you write make me yearn. Your Doms love women, use women, pleasure women but do not aduse or disrespect women! If only I could find one like this!
A new made fan!
i really like this story. i hope you continue it and turn it into a series.
Love dom/sub stories. This one was very good. Would like to read some about dom women dominating both men and women.