All Comments on 'Sometimes She Cries'

Literally love at first sight. They were made for each other, another great story!

It was in fact a Romance tale. You built a nice foundation for the woman’s character: Potential issues to be resolved etc. IMO, the development which followed that thorough introduction was too short. You could have developed more some of her issues with men. Based on all the ground work you made in the intro part. For example: Even if her connection with this guy is as good as it seems, people always need to work through their issues.

Excellent write, regardless of the category. But I must agree, there needs to be more there. The foundation was excellent.