All Comments on 'Sometimes the Good Guy Wins Ch. 02'

great story but scary how momma knows everything that happens as if she has video survailence on them or esp please continue the story and the other stories you have started please they are all great

Liked the second chapter can't wait for the next chapter

good but what about donna and linda

Great story so far and it is a bit creepy that mom knows everything but it is actually true some moms do know everything I know mine did when I was growing up my brothers still wonder how she knew what she knew.

Nice story and well told. Please CONTINUE with this tale.

Mice fun story!

It has been interesting to read where you have taken it!

I have interest in reading the rest!

Thanks for writing!

that I would normally not be reading. You have written Nick & LeeAnn to be characters with depth. I look forward to their adventures. Thank you.

Thanks for writing another excellent story.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I am glad you continued this story line... Once again I have enjoyed the

writing, and the reading was very enjoyable... I am glad he and his sister are now on the road together, as driver and companion and soon to be future wife... Their mom seems to know evrything about them their thoughts and activities, even before they know themselves what they are going to do, should be interesting to see what occurs next...

A great and, dare I say it, sensitive story. Thanks a lot!

I got a complaint about chapter two from anon. His/her complaint was that I led him on about Donna and Linda, then dropped them completely in chapter two. For those who wonder about them and wonder where the story os going I have a warning. I have given hints about one or two curves in the road ahead, but doubt if they were obvious enough to be caught. He's one more hint: Sammi has a secret and she's been hiding it from Nick. Oops, I almost gave you another hint.

Expect chapter three before Sept. first.

since when did you start letting people who read and like your stuff have hints. I just like to go along for the ride. Hell if i watned mysteries I would read Nancy Drew or sumpin..Prick Traccy...jeat the facts mam just the facts

Butch

This IS a very special momma -

Read on please I suspect you will love her too -

The trick to 'Mama' esp is to pay attention when interrogating a suspect. My wife did this to me and other people all the time. It was fascinating to observe her ask leading questions that encouraged people to voluntarily confess their life stories. Damn annoying when she would do it to me....especially when I was guilty! Sometimes she'd make me so discombobulated, I'd confess even when I was innocent of what ever wrong doing she suspected.

44, 44a, 44z doesn't matter. Sick pathetic people can't resist putting their genitals into siblings. It "Started in the Rain" and just keeps going. Sad that someone who envisions themselves as so desirable can't find anyone unrelated to have sex with. This is the sick kind of crap that should't be tolerated were this site managed with any intelligence. Surely some like minded idiot will make irrelevant commentary on me being a prude. I'll take BDSM, anal sex, group whatever and love it. Just don't drag in the relatives. Disgusting and sad. This guy doesn't need to write, he needs help. Lots of it. Please stop.

Although a bit old I’m really enjoying this tale. Do not know how I missed it before.

4/5

Good story, but if you are worried a woman might be carrying disease, don't stick your face in her puss, and don't taste her every couple of hours.

To Anonymous 6 years ago or so: You are reading the wrong category on this site.

I enjoyed Chapter 1. In this chapter, the story started getting really weird. Out of nowhere, a brother and sister decide to have sex and even get married. Their mother was completely OK with this. Zero lead-up to there being any attraction between the siblings.