by Ravynsloft
I thought your story was the best it left me numb all the way down
I absolutely loved the story. I was just wondering what happened to her boyfriend. It would make for a good 2nd part if maybe he walked in on them and joined in or something like that. Very well written.
This is undoubtedly one of the best stories ever posted on Literotica. It is well-written in all aspects of the art of writing. It is incredibly erotic, passionate, and best of very believable.
Thanks for taking the time to compose it, and then posting it.
BRAVO!
That was so hot and brilliantly written too!!!!!
So hot! Had me wet and masturbating to it most of the time! ;) Please keep up the great work and I will continue reading your stories!
All three of your listings are beautifully told and need no improvement. I'm sure that your readers would like more...just like Oliver Twist...which reminds me that the 'fickle finger'was a beautifully erotic touch.
You said she had even taken a shower with Dee before. Then you said that she had never seen Dee's shaved pussy before. I found that a little distracting.
Girl -Girl seduction under the influence is experimenting. Male to Female seduction under the influence is a crime. Please explain.