by coaster2
I'm thoroughly enjoying your story and look forward to each new chapter. Thank you.
I guess the fact that I adore big thick books with many characters explains why I am enjoying this so much.
The author hasn't studied Southern accents very well. "Y'all" is plural. It is never used when addressing a single person. The sentence "Yes suh, I have. Nace to see y'all agin, ma'am." is nonsense.
Other than that, it is on its way to a great story.