All Comments on 'Southbound Ch. 09-10'

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Sid0604Sid0604over 9 years ago
Another great chapter...

I'm thoroughly enjoying your story and look forward to each new chapter. Thank you.

bruce22bruce22over 9 years ago
Entertaining Piece

I guess the fact that I adore big thick books with many characters explains why I am enjoying this so much.

gopher25gopher25over 3 years ago
Y'all is Plural

The author hasn't studied Southern accents very well. "Y'all" is plural. It is never used when addressing a single person. The sentence "Yes suh, I have. Nace to see y'all agin, ma'am." is nonsense.

Other than that, it is on its way to a great story.

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